All Comments on 'Sally Anne'

A fan, A groupie, a lustful admirer, a lesbian lover, or all of these. Only the future will expose their edgy hidden desires coming to fruition....

Well done, I think you and Sally shound so sexy together.

Huney, you really need an editor or proofreader !

This could grow into a fun story.

Please carry on.

I hope you enjoy reading my stories but I'm offering my erotic tales for free, sharing intimate thoughts and feelings, If my spelling errors upset you don't read me again, simple, acting superior correcting small errors says more about you then me. They are not a legal brief constructed so every word is perfect, I have a tumbling out style writing from emotion, desire, writing fun erotica, fantasy. I love feedback even the harsh comments from the grammar police what would be helpful to acknowledge though is not only are some of these rules the grammar police hold so dear incredibly capricious, they're also constantly changing. The thing that is oft overlooked is that as language changes, as it naturally does over time, the rules that govern it should change as well. My stories are meant to be a fun ride for the readers spilling out of me emotion unedited raw

I hope you enjoy reading my stories as much as I enjoyed writing them. If my errors upset you don't read me again, simple, acting superior correcting small errors says more about you then me. They are not a legal brief constructed so every word is perfect, I have a tumbling out style writing from emotion, desire, writing fun erotica, fantasy. This is a hobby not a job my stories are free to all. I love the feedback even the harsh comments from the grammar police what would be helpful to acknowledge though is not only are some of these rules the grammar police hold so dear incredibly capricious, they're also constantly changing. The thing that is oft overlooked is that as language changes, as it naturally does over time, the rules that govern it should change as well. My stories are meant to be a fun ride for the readers spilling out of me emotion unedited raw