by DtyOldMn
So your first story is a swinging/swap story. It could be worse you could be writing cuck stories.
I'll encourage your first story with a 5.
But this sounds more like a first draft written from notes. Take your time and try writing more to expand on such stories. It's a learning process.
Very well written!
RV parks are great places to hook-up more than the vehicle. My husband and I go weekend RVing frequently, and finding a willing couple to play with is not difficult. We are in our 40s, and most of our playmates are older, but they love to be with strangers, whether it a soft swing or full swap. RV sex is as good as hotel sex, and knowing that others parked nearby may hear what is happening is an additional turn on. Afterward, we all go our separate ways, happy and fulfilled.