All Comments on 'Shepherdess without a Flock Ch. 02'

The sketch drawings, in and of themselves, could fly, but it appears you're just snapping digital photos of the sketches with your phone. You need more light, for starters. What may seem reasonably well lit for your own, unaugmented, vision is not sufficient for a photograph. It makes them look dark and gloomy. I think you were probably using a white sketch pad, but some of the pics look like they were drawn on a brown paper shopping bag. That's because of the lighting. Next, instead of snapping a pic, try scanning the sketches. You won't get that "fade to dark" effect that you got here, where you're obviously just holding up the paper with one hand while snapping away with the other. And if you don't have access to a scanner, at least prop the drawing up on a flat surface (a flat and WELL LIT surface) to take your picture. And finally, once you've got your digital image, crop it so the the image isn't off-center, too big or small, or tilted to the left or right. There are any number of simple "photoshop-ish" programs to let you do that, depending on what came, standard, on your computer.

Thank you for the advice. I have a Chromebook, so I cannot attach or download anything that requires executable files. I will make sure to add more light for Chapter 3. The chapter is finished and I'm just about to start my new drawings today. Thanks for reading.

This is a very interesting and nice sexy story Thank You

You have included such stupidities as "When hew jaw ...."!!

Presumably you MEANT '... her jaw ...'??

Would you have missed things like that if you had proof read?

Proofread is one word. "Hew" means smoothed by repetitive motion. When hew jaw needed a break, she popped off.

My grandma can draw sexier pictures than that

Please give me your grandmother's contact information. I'm thinking about doing another illustrated series.

Thank you for including the pictures. I love that you made the effort to hand draw them. keep up the good work

Thank you. The drawings are all done for the final chapter and the plotting is finished. There's just a few pages of fleshing out to do.

This just gets better and better. Such a great read. I see some moral conflict beginning to brew. Can't wait to see what goes on next.