All Comments on 'Shy Cam Girl Pt. 02'

Unfortunately the spelling and grammar ruined an otherwise great concept. The story itself is hot. Love the idea, but you desperately need an editor. Your use of there and their, to and too, your and you're, then and than really detracts from the flow of the story. This is meant to be constructive, so I hope it's taken that way :)

I'm eager for the next chapter

Brilliant part 2, really glad you continued the story.

preach girl. I was wondering if I should write my own stories.

Great rendition of the cam girl life.

A terrific set of stories! And that was one lucky fan. 5 stars from me!

Excellent of its type. Part 1 had character development, which is part of what I look for in a story, even a filthy one - this is more a linear series of sex scenes . What does stand out is the vivid sense of your joy in a really big cock, which is adorable.