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by Sunadmire

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Stoere_BoerStoere_Boerover 1 year ago

Another good story Sun. It took a bit to get used to the name switching between real and fake, but I think you kept it together nicely.

Personally, I would like to see Dirk fuck Laura for a main meal, and take Sis for deserts. Sandra can be the cherry on top...

Can't wait for Chapter 8!

StagOfMzansiStagOfMzansiabout 1 year ago

Good story. I think I should start at Chapter 1 and work my way through. I hope you're planning some interracial action while Dirk and Steve are on the farm - maybe get the daughter of the farmworker involved.

SkaamPlaasMeisieSkaamPlaasMeisie6 months ago

I would have loved it if you kept the identity of Sis and Sandra hidden for the reader until Steve discovered it. Still loved the story, 5 stars and favorite.

SunadmireSunadmire6 months agoAuthor

Thank you for all the positive comments. I'll see if I can work in some of the suggestions.

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Love to read hot stories with some drama. Got going on a few stories. I try to give it a South African flavour, while keeping it relevant to the international audience. If you like my stories, give it a high score. Enjoy.