All Comments on 'Tarton Ch. 14'

That hideous bitch Olive is a dark horse for sure. A total hypocrite as most 'religious' people are. Sylvia, you find it impossible to refuse sex, any sort of sex, with anybody. You really are a whore, a fucking Hot'n'Sexy one though!

The entire story builds to the last line, which is beyond wonderful. I like the way you make it sound so easy, almost natural, to do all of those amazing things. The most disgusting, from my point of view, was the oral sex with Olive.I agree with Kennyboy82's description of her. Until this story, I didn't know she was so fat. I guess she caries it well. It I remember England well enough, Id guess it's too many Wimpyburgers over the years. I like the name wimpyburger much more than than the burgers themselves! 5* from your loyal fan. ~~JB