by Naughtylit81
This chapter lost it for me. This part went, dare I say, a bit racist to me. I can understand Nia coming to Brains aid and consoling him, but the sex scene went white domination over black. She had another obligation to visit her sister. Brain's character to me would not have gone that way as he was portrayed in the first chapter. But this just my opinion.
Good premise.
Still too rushed.
Sex starts too abruptly. Continues too rapidly. Ends too soon.
Needed more action with her ass than just grabbing it.
Four stars.
I could see each scene as if it was playing out right before my eyes. well done. can't wait to see what happens next. can't wait to see anna finding Nia's panties, and cleaning up creampies.
This is one of my favorite stories I read on here in a very long time. Keep up the good work and please release more chapters soon. We really need more black woman/white male erotica on this site, the added element of raceplay is great. Pretty soon Nia will be inspiring Brian to get more vocal by the looks of it. Really great concept and build up so far.
Him taking control of Nia doesn't make sense. She needs to maintain control of him and take control of the wife. Then when the husband has successfully bred Nia, let the training of Anne begin.
I loved this one too!! It seems Brian made the biggest mistake of his life marrying that white bitchy cunt just as I myself made in marrying my first wife!! I love Nia's brashness! Once again, 5 stars!!
She is taking control of him. By introducing race play into their sex she is breaking him down. She is domming him from the bottom until she takes control.
I'm liking how this is shaping up.
Fingers crossed chapter 3 gets posted tomorrow (2/2) and I am working on chapter 4 already. Thanks for the continued engagement and support.
Can ya'll please post the next chapter! It has been submiited and people are waiting. C'mon literotica give the people what they want.