by chris_coup
Glad to see this tale back. One of my favourites! Excited to hear that there is some trials and tribulations for these three soon. Things have seemed a bit too rosy, which don't get me wrong, is not a bad thing. But now it is getting more interesting.
I just hope you don't sacrifice the character building that you've done so well, for some dramatic moments like so many other writers do. Keeping things consistent with the character traits that you've developed will keep this story excellent. Rather than introducing disputes that don't make sense with the characters just for the sake of it. Keep up the good work.
OUTSTANDING and 5 STARS. Great storytelling and such wonderful character development and expanding their emotions and adding the possible dark drama ahead. Maybe some hard punishment for the trade off of the thrill of a huge cock. Maybe Kylie will need to punish both Paul and his big cock needy wife. Bring on the fun and games. Glad to enjoy your stories. Cheers