All Comments on 'The Cruise Pt. 02'

by nigelver

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I didn't think this was possible

But Chapter two was WORSE than Chapter one. The writing is ghastly and I swear the characters couldn't count to five if their lives depended upon it. You can't make people this dumb and expect the story to have any chance of being entertaining. This was awful. Please don't post again. It's like you're deliberately trolling the readers with this garbage.

1 star

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

I had hoped this unloved boat would sink after the first chapter, but here you come with more about this garbage scow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
English Cuckolds and Sluts

Are all Englishmen cuckolds and Englishwomen whores

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