All Comments on 'The Interrogation Pt. 01'

Off to a great start! Keeping an eye for the rest of the two parts!

introduction is to slow. needs another page to be considered the beginning of any story.

Well, way too short to begin a possible long interrogation for Red. Not able to give any rating yet because nothing has really happened. Maybe this is a husband/wife roleplay? Maybe an actual kidnapping? We don't know yet.

There isn't much here to gauge what the story is about.