All Comments on 'The Interrogation Pt. 01'

There isn't much here to gauge what the story is about.

Well, way too short to begin a possible long interrogation for Red. Not able to give any rating yet because nothing has really happened. Maybe this is a husband/wife roleplay? Maybe an actual kidnapping? We don't know yet.

introduction is to slow. needs another page to be considered the beginning of any story.

Off to a great start! Keeping an eye for the rest of the two parts!