All Comments on 'The Loving Wife -- 750 Words'

Where was the cheating?

To Aardie: I realized after I published this, I should have changed that last line to:

"... and I smiled with the feeling of being desired more than the others!

(It would have taken changing some phrasing earlier to conserve three more words.)

Great Story ...

... The 750 word contest forces us, we writers, to be at our very best!

@Aardie Nowhere in the description of the LW category does it say there must be cheating in a story. Some wives in Loving Wives are just Loving Wives.

A true loving wife. Well done.

Useless. No fish, no meat. Nothing.

Description of a sex act; not a story (750 or otherwise)

So, the author's comment is saying is that "750 words" was his most important objective in writing this story?

750 words -- what moron established this as a goal to be aspired(?) to?

It practically GUARANTEES that a writer will spend more time 'chasing' EXACT word count than developing a good story plot. The "750 Word Project" .... the DUMB idea of a literary idiot!

This author immediately revised his own story -- via the "comments" section, no less (by removing one simple word and then adding four new words that substantially altered the story's import) -- just so his story could be submitted with exactly 750 words.

(Your Honor, the prosecution rests...)

some how if I was to watch the video and imagine my wife with 4 guys I would not be hard... ruin the moment all together.

"More than the others" would have ruined it. It was OK, not great, not awful but making it seem she was one of several would have made it a 1 instead of a 3

The 750-word stories you find here with EXACTLY 750 words is due to a Literotica rule which is they won't post any story of less than 750 words. (They don't want to be bogged down with advertising blurbs or incomplete thoughts.)

So, the challenge to authors at this time every year is to write exactly 750-words with a beginning, middle, and end for a complete story. And YES, we are chasing that exact word count, because it challenges us to choose our words creatively and more efficiently.

Nice loving wife.

Lifestyle actually wrote a LW story?

Tasty!

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Almost unbelievable in this Cucking Wives category: a slut wife, but only for her husband ! Such very rare event certainly deserves a full positive rating: 5 full stars !

It reads like a man making wrong assumptions about a woman's behavior.