All Comments on 'The Making of a PokeSlut 04 - Beedrill'

Great work as always! I was thrilled when I saw that a new chapter was out and was even happier to see it live up to the previous entries.

Thanks for all the time and effort you must have put into this!

Awesome story man, cant wait for the other parts.

Great, cant wait to see what pokemon comes next ;)

Can’t wait to see the next type of Pokémon, honestly great work

Large lips are gross. Too unnatural and too often from botched jobs or allergies and on allergy note often related to death or also health wise look like facial tumors. Entire breathing part is also over the top as it goes far beyond spanking or other stuff and treads to close to the hardcore abuse and snuff territory

Overall still one of the best pokemon fanfics I have ever seen

Sorry for being impatient but I check for the next chapter regularly, do you have a eta for upload. Cheers

When’s the next chapter!?;) love it

Keen for next chapter

Absolutely loving this series, I hope to see the next chapter soon!

Good luck

Great story waiting on next chapter

great story cant wait for part 5 and 6

Loving this storyline. Keep them coming!

I re-read this series regularly. It's well written, sexy and also humorous. Can't wait for 5 & 6!

I never comment on anything related to this kinda stuff because I'm insecure but please make more soon if you have the time I know it's a lot to ask '.'

Parts 5 and 6?

I love this story series and check back for updates almost daily. Thank you for your work on this, its well written, hot, and funny

A really great series! Enjoyed your imaginative writing, and really looking forward to Ch 05

I really like this series, it’s hot!!! I keep checking for updates too

Good news then, Chapter 5 is pending approval as we speak :)