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shayneone10 months agoyour friend would be proud i found your story emotional and entertaining as usual well look after your self be happy well and safe a fan shayne
NoLongerAnon11 months agoAn excellent ending to this series. I too will miss Maonaigh. I didn't know him as you did, but I would look for his comments on every story that I read.
Candy_Kane5411 months agoAuthorTo Anonymous
I debated long and hard whether I should take the time to discuss your issues with my story.
Sadly, I decided to answer your concerns.
I assume that you always pick up a book, flip to the last chapter, and expect to read the ending and expect everything to make sense.
At the start of Part 4, I did say it would help to read Part 3 first. If you had, you would have seen the last line of Part 3 which went: "As I fell asleep, I dreamed about my babies ..."
Reading that, you'd have had a clue that Part 4 started with a dream sequence. If you had bothered to read the first three parts of the story, you would have known it was a dream sequence about something that had never happened.
I do thank you for taking the time to tell me why you rated my story a 1* but in effect you rated your ability to read a story.
Anonymous11 months agoI couldn't read through this as it's too confusing. In the first line you talk about (I assume Anna) feeding the twins and then going back to see George. A little bit later (years obviously) she's talking to George and saying she's not sure if they're identical or fraternal twins, or even girls. To be honest I haven't read the other parts as I've never seen them, but even if it's explained better in earlier parts, there should be a bit of summary to clear things up. Sorry, but only 1*.
