All Comments on 'The Slave Ch. 04-05'

Single page chapters are bad enough, but TWO chapters on a single page?!?

There were 8 new stories posted today. Not a single one scored above 3 stars. This was the worst of the lot. In the first place this belongs in BDSM, FETISH or NON-CON. Author - you MUST know that! Why are you posting this garbage in the loving wives section? To troll the readership? And what is Literotica doing? Do they have NO standards? Just plain stupid. When she brands him, she's going to prison. He's going to call the police and the women are going to jail. Done and done. Not only did you write a horrible story and post it in the wrong place, you left it unfinished. Go away. Stay away.

No stars as even giving this crap one star would be an insult to the star.

Had you posted it properly, I would have given it 5 stars but it’s not love or about loving wives, it’s about sex and power.

Stories can belong to multiple genres at once. It’s called ‘the slave’ - what were you expecting? Are love and bdsm supposed to be exclusive? That’s a sad perspective.

Keep the zero stars coming, because that is exactly how much i care about my ratings.

Another author who obviously writes solely for their own entertainment. Why bore everyone else with it?

It’s also a bit disturbing that you don’t understand consent. People get tattoo-style brands all the time.

Unless I missed something and Ethan is cheating on someone, it's standard Kimky fantasy progression.

Now if it turns to cruelty and abuse, I'll call it shite.

I enjoyed it Thanks

No worries, it stays happily consensual all the way through.