All Comments on 'The Train Ride Pt. 03'

“I had never been treated like this before, but my body told me I had been missing out.”

Just one of many lines I really liked in this erotic, and indeed, fun story.

I’m enjoying this fun and hot story. It would be better with the grammatical errors removed (Word or Google Docs should do most for you), and stick to past tense throughout.

It would have been awesome if as she was leaving she saw the man from the train approaching late! Who just fucked her? Some homeless dude. 😂