by Tom_Brown
The ability for the writer to make you want more, just like Tina,Tim and Dan want more is exciting, I like how Tim reclaims Tina a little but only satisfies his own needs, maybe driving Tina more towards Dans cock.
Why can't there be a twist to this. Maybe Tina gives Tim one last chance before she allows Dan inside her.
Have taken the time to read all chapters again, amazing story thank you x