All Comments on 'Trail of Silver Skulls Ch. 05'

The story is good but the chapters are far to short. Hope you continue.

All is good, except for short chapters and the implausible "phantom vibrations" that really make this story much less realistic. This overly fantastic device takes away the suspension of disbelief in the same way so many "mind control" stories fail, since it almost like matching a story about magic and wizardly. Have the device malfunction and a good old physical stimulation device installed and the readership will buy it and stick with the story. Thanks.

still going great, is moving a little faster, but the short chapters do take away from the moving forward. please continue writing..