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Click hereThey were seated quickly by an amazed maître d, who also couldn't take his eyes off Sue's tits. She was blushing the entire time and remained flushed with embarrassment and excitement even after they were seated.
"God you look so gorgeous tonight," Mark said. "Just everyone is staring at your tits."
"I feel so... naked and excited and embarrassed," Sue croaked as he sipped her water.
"Oh, look, here comes Carter," Mark said smiling evilly at his wife.
"Not tonight dear," she replied.
"Okay, sweetheart."
"Good even... holy shit!" Carter said getting a look at the front of Sue's dress.
"And a good evening to you Carter," Sue replied giggling.
"Will you being having dessert tonight?" Carter asked.
"Sorry, not tonight, Carter. We have someplace to be and can't be late," Susan said.
"That's too bad. Okay, what would you like to drink tonight?"
Susan and Mark gave Carter their drink order and their dinner orders. Dinner went well. All the waiters came by to witness the lady who would dare to brazenly display herself in such a manner. Susan was so excited and embarrassed at what Mark was making her do. They quickly finished and Mark paid the bill and tipped Carter. Susan also tipped Carter with a hug and a kiss. They stood waiting for their car, Susan stood regally and proud while other valets stood looking at her. When the car came, Mark opened the passenger door and Susan slid in. Mark hurried to the driver's side, tipped the valet, climbed in and they were off.
To be continues...
Note: The third part has been written but not edited. The fourth part is in process, still being written. I hope you enjoyed the story up to now. Thank you for taking the time to read my works.
- COMMENTS
MofCheshireabout 1 year agoFive Stars!
Great followup, enjoy the characters and storyline, so believable!
Zeb_Carteralmost 3 years agoAuthor@BeauReady And you have no idea how viagra works, do you. It doesn't help you cum, it keep your dick hard, just like your head. And at forty I could get hard and cum each time. Maybe not as much as the first time, but three time with is dribble on the fourth. And besides this is fiction where forty is the new twenty or maybe 18. Look up the word fiction. Or maybe this is Science fiction.
BeauReadyalmost 3 years agoEntertaining fiction along the lines of Superman or giant cock comics, but doesn't come anywhere near to qualifying as fantasy or erotica.
C'mon, 40-yr-old men will be able to come twice in one nite once maybe twice a year without chemical assistance such as Viagra or testosterone or even ecstasy - and a minimum three hour recuperation time. Three or four times in one nite?!? Even 15-yr-olds have some trouble pulling that off!
Speaking of 15-yr-olds, that's the mentality of every character, particularly the wife, who somehow believes that she can love her husband and her marriage even more than before she was simultaneously getting fucked by complete strangers - in multiples, yet! How much could she have possibly "loved" her husband before he allowed her to fuck complete strangers?? Complete fictional nonsense (not even fantasy or erotica).
But, she doesn't have the maturity or "love" to accept and support quid pro quo for hubby - the equality for him to fuck female strangers he can pick up. Where's the balance and fairness with this glaring omission?
Get real - drop the "I love you because you let me fuck strange cock" bullshit.
This kind of wife doesn't even have the self-respect, the dignity, the strength of character or morality to tell her husband "I'm married and I don't cheat on my vows just because my husband is a sick fuck pervert!"
As erotica, this rates 1* star; as fiction it rates 3* stars.
kensimooreabout 3 years agoI commented on "Susan Part 01" and personally found it much better than part 02. I particularly liked the Strip Club and hope Susan returns and decides to go to the private room. Thanks!
OGHMNWover 4 years agoYes, at appears rules were broken or was he only rubbing her clit with his cock? Mark sure has been planning things without sharing with Susan ahead of time. Of course she really didn’t seem to upset with their experience with Carter for dessert. Mark’s had thing prepared with having the motel room booked and ready with cameras. The amount of sex they have had that weekend is unbelievable. They are acting like “porno” stars with all of their personal time, various partners and reclaiming sex. It is hard to understand that they have been married 17 years and haven’t started a family and decided that in 3 months they might and then they go and start acting out these “Fantasies”.. It’s still very Hot and Erotic and looking forward to reading more of their Sexual Erotic Adventures.
rodryder44over 4 years agoNeat characters, hot situations, great story. No negative comments - amazing.
HikingThruover 4 years agoI got into this chapter, and went back to see the rules they agreed to, and she already went bareback in the shower the first time hubby was not right there? To keep up the "honesty" they committed to, he should have ended the encounter right there. Everyone focuses on grammar and commas as "editing" but a good editor would challenge that slip, as it undermines what makes this story different from most.
twointriguedover 4 years agoI’m a fan of watching a wife or girlfriend, having been in his shoes. Extremely erotic. But there were rules, and rules are important so that each partner knows where the boundary lines are drawn. The wife already crossed one line by letting Bob enter her without a condom. Safe sex is so important in this type of adventure, as is respect for your partner. I’d like to see more of where their adventures take them, but I am getting a little blase with Susan orgasming all the time, and seemingly just by talking to her. Maybe tone it down a little. None of my women came as often as Susan, but when they did, it was because they were getting a good fucking. Also, ‘editing’ doesn’t mean just sprucing the story up. It also means catching misspellings and using good punctuation. Give some thought to using someone else for your editing because you aren’t getting the job done.
AnnetteBishopover 4 years agoWell written and great scripting. I can see myself in Susan’s place. I’d definitely want to fuck the private dance customers. My husband would let me do bareback. Can’t wait for more. xoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋💋
Whackdoodleover 4 years agoThere was no real chemistry between the husband and wife, just a wife who acquiesced to everything her husband wanted because she lived him soooooo much.
Which reminds me, people in love still behave like people. They don’t check their brains at the door and happily go along with everything.
No matter how hot a woman is, it’s unlikely anyone will be moaning as she passes by. That doesn’t happen, because most people will glance, appreciate and then move on. Pervs will continue to ogle but those are few and far between.
The rest of the story was just as bad.
