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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I wisely skimmed through quickly expecting it be the drivel it is. That Jamal sure does get around. In one story he's in Jamaica, in another he's a doctor, then there's the one where he's a pimp. The list seems endless, and now, a college professor? Wow. What a guy. 2*

dapidapi12 months ago

He forgot to pay her. Guess Big Louie will be coming around to collect or bust a kneecap or 2.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Amateurish, at best. Trite, over used descriptions, and scenario. And my absolute favorite: a description that doesn’t add up! Which is she? A fit cheerleader? Or a zaftig blond? A girl with double D tits and a big, jiggly ass isn’t going to cut it as a cheerleader. Good erotic writing is more than just putting your fantasies on paper, so to speak.

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Hello, don't mind me, just writing for fun over here about some of my sexual experiences. I also love to reward fans of my stories with pictures, custom stories and special videos.

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