All Comments on 'University Whore'

Amateurish, at best. Trite, over used descriptions, and scenario. And my absolute favorite: a description that doesn’t add up! Which is she? A fit cheerleader? Or a zaftig blond? A girl with double D tits and a big, jiggly ass isn’t going to cut it as a cheerleader. Good erotic writing is more than just putting your fantasies on paper, so to speak.

He forgot to pay her. Guess Big Louie will be coming around to collect or bust a kneecap or 2.

Drivel indeed.

I wisely skimmed through quickly expecting it be the drivel it is. That Jamal sure does get around. In one story he's in Jamaica, in another he's a doctor, then there's the one where he's a pimp. The list seems endless, and now, a college professor? Wow. What a guy. 2*