All Comments on 'Unpacking'

Like how you started your short, well written piece. Lighthearted as we get a glimpse of two characters. Flopping dildo hilarious. And the intensely erotic sex — easily pictured/felt.

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. fyi there is an even shorter Part 1 from earlier that day. I don't like having 'parts' in the title, prefer the story being about 'one' moment.