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All Comments on 'Veronique Goes Sailing Ch. 07'

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lc69hunterlc69hunter10 months ago

all the moving parts in this saga...

DaddyWarBucksDaddyWarBucks10 months ago

So good to be reading The continued exploits of your three MCs. You do such a good job of developing them, that I feel I know them. Doesn't hurt that you craft some great sex scenes. More, More, More

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit2460110 months ago

Love what you’re done so far, but as soon as I saw this was a two-pager I thought, “Nope. This won’t be the full party. Can’t possibly be.”

Proved right again!

It’s odd to have a chapter break in the midst of a “scene”. Can’t really understand your purpose or why you thought this would work better than publishing the entire incident.

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