by Kamac
Elliot is a real card. Looks like this is heading where I originally thought.
Whatever about the proposed sexual assault (different strokes for different folks), I am really looking forward to the see-through dress and the party. I LOVE the thought of that and that it allows the husband to plausible deniability! He can claim he knew nothing about it and say he didn't notice the dress become momentarily see-through when her colleagues were taking photos.
Was worried this story was gonna get stale, but this chapter is full of delights. I like how you've used different forms of exposure, downblouse, see thru, wardrobe malfunction etc. throughout the story. Excellent chapter and I immensely look forward to the next one.
Hank's and Professor x's intentions and desires are,to a certain extent,predictable and expected of two old perverts.I have to say,where this story arc has really become explosive is the interplay between Holly and her work mates.The sheer,animalistic erotic charge has just shifted up to another level.Time will tell if you decide to pursue this line of the narrative.I really hope you do,there is a lot of mileage in it and you do it so very well.Really high calibre writing.Well done indeed.
Enjoying it so far. Hope to see more focus on the online exposure barely held together, or not at all eventually.
Great stuff mate, love where the story is heading
Can't wait for the next installment! Ended on a cliffhanger
Loved reading them all.
Writing the final part now. Drop me a private message if you can guess how it ends. If you're right, I'll send you the story to read ahead of publishing on here. K
Cannot wait for her to be wearing that see thru dress with her unaware!
Excited to read about her wearing the dress to the party and her colleagues taking a ton of pictures of her while she’s unaware of her level of exposure.
Personally prefer the Hank/ProfessorxX interplay to the see-through dress but impressed you can pull so many people along into the depths of your imagination.
Would be sad to see it end at part 6, there are several avenues you have opened that shout for further parts, such as Holy having to deal with the fallout of her dress photos (colleague blackmail sub-plot? Maybe steered by Hank? Where Warren only finds out by photos send by Hank - think he'd find that hot but conflicting), Hank getting Warren to setup another visit to Holly (assuming that happens in part 6 :-) but on marital bed, perhaps with ProfessorxX, and/or with Wedding dress, perhaps with Warren forced to give Holly a roofie.
Just so many paths to explore - poor Holly...
Please keep up the excellent writing!
I think Elliott needs to find Warren's posts on the forum, recognize H, and contact Warren. She would know exactly who would be the only one to be able to post it all. Her blackmail could involve him too... Maybe she insists he fucks H while H licks her, and gets it all on film?
Last chapter?? But there's so much more that can happen! You've got such a great premise and have set it all up so nicely. Would be a shame to rush it all to conclusion. It feels like a network just cancelled one of my favorite new shows and the writers are now rushing to write an ending to the series in the middle of the first season.
Don't leave us hanging! Can't wait to find out what happens to Holly and Warren