All Comments on 'What Happens in Vegas Pt. 02'

by ao1701e

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You really kill the story with the aunt. Not any reason to add her to the storyline.

upyoursixupyoursixalmost 2 years ago

I'm a little confused what story actually comes next...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

ZEROZEROZERO....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

As a story it was average. The use of the present tense killed it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I guess that is the end of the story. June is let go and Charlie gets laid a lot more. I assume there is not more blackmail now that June was released by Jessica.

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