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This is wonderful, it just keeps getting better! I don't know how you capture perfectly a teenage boy's sexually frustrated musings, but surely you do! And the humiliating flirting, ostensibly to get a lower price on fixing the fence, but in reality dancing with a dangerous fantasy, is perfectly done. I suspect Sylvia is beginning to like giving blowjobs, as she sees what it does to Sean, and probably to other men as well. I am so, so into this story! 5* ~~JB

I couldn't have said it better. All true, hope you continue soon, so mindblowingly erotic