Meh, nothing really new or interesting about this story. Without erotic elements on an erotica site this is just some weird emotional abuse on behalf of the wife.
This was different, I love it. Please continue with this story. I like that Jack is willing to clean up his own cup and then suck Anni belles cock. Your story is very thought provoking. I would like to be with an "Annabelle"
Oh god no threesomes whelp I think I'll stop at chapter 2 I love his but threesomes arnt for me when the first 2 chapters are about how much they love each other and then they suddenly decide to bring in a third wheel it just spoils the story but hey ur the author u do u
Such a wonderful story that was as fun as it was erotic. It is a must read. I’m a bit sad tho that it ended here. One more chapter detailing their future would have been nice. Is Michael just a conquest, friends with benefits or is it the beginning of a relationship? The story ended just a bit too soon without closure.
This story was absolutely fabulous. So well written, great characters and premise. The love Victoria has for Ashley is what made this story for me and I’m so glad Ashley put Victoria number one in her life. My only negative comments would be…I wanted to read about Mike getting told off and permanently shunned by Victoria for his treatment of Ashley. I also really wanted to read about a conversation between Ashley and Victoria, with Ashley questioning Victoria about how she exposed her to Teddy and Mike without her approval or knowledge and how she also set Ashley up with Teddy and the show tickets for a second date. It all worked out well, but I think there would have been a good conversation between the two the next day. With all that said, this is a must read! 5 Stars for sure…this writer is good at what they do!
This was a fantastic story! Not usually a fan of cuckold stories, but this was written so well into the story that I was fine with it. Hoping part 2 keeps the couple together and happy.
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Fantastic as always, was surprised to see Erica had her cock removed for a vagina.
Great stuff! I hope to see more from you.
That's one of the hottest stories on Literotica!
A very hot story but a very difficult read with all of the grammar and spelling mistakes.
Thank you for writing and posting here.
Meh, nothing really new or interesting about this story. Without erotic elements on an erotica site this is just some weird emotional abuse on behalf of the wife.
This was different, I love it. Please continue with this story. I like that Jack is willing to clean up his own cup and then suck Anni belles cock. Your story is very thought provoking. I would like to be with an "Annabelle"
still waiting for more
Oh god no threesomes whelp I think I'll stop at chapter 2 I love his but threesomes arnt for me when the first 2 chapters are about how much they love each other and then they suddenly decide to bring in a third wheel it just spoils the story but hey ur the author u do u
Please don't drop this
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Great story! Keep it up.
Such a wonderful story that was as fun as it was erotic. It is a must read. I’m a bit sad tho that it ended here. One more chapter detailing their future would have been nice. Is Michael just a conquest, friends with benefits or is it the beginning of a relationship? The story ended just a bit too soon without closure.
This story was absolutely fabulous. So well written, great characters and premise. The love Victoria has for Ashley is what made this story for me and I’m so glad Ashley put Victoria number one in her life. My only negative comments would be…I wanted to read about Mike getting told off and permanently shunned by Victoria for his treatment of Ashley. I also really wanted to read about a conversation between Ashley and Victoria, with Ashley questioning Victoria about how she exposed her to Teddy and Mike without her approval or knowledge and how she also set Ashley up with Teddy and the show tickets for a second date. It all worked out well, but I think there would have been a good conversation between the two the next day. With all that said, this is a must read! 5 Stars for sure…this writer is good at what they do!
This was a fantastic story! Not usually a fan of cuckold stories, but this was written so well into the story that I was fine with it. Hoping part 2 keeps the couple together and happy.
His mistake has open door for her wildest dreams. Her fuck toy.