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The physical collar so symbolic of the suffocating, chafing, raw weight of the emotional one. So very well done. 5*

Thank you Satyr 💜

Well said

This is a beautiful poem, Ana.

“Sweat-slicked flesh echoed through the room,” I love it.

WOW!! HOT & SO INTOXICATING. I LOVE THIS!!

Seriously reminds me of the long distant relationship I'm in. Beautiful & very touching.

Thank you! That's a lovely analogy!

Incredibly thought provoking, even touching...both to my heart & soul.

Tore at my heart and soul. Absolutely AMAZING!! Really incredible!!

UTTERLY INCREDIBLE. I'M BESIDE MYSELF IN AWE!!

WOW!! AMAZING!! BRILLIANT!!

Thank you guys! That is exactly how I wanted to portray this poem 🥰

You maybe need a lesser passion

So the scansion is in fashion

And fits with the mood I feel

To give your romance five appeal

Méli

Beautiful adoration!

Oh yes! Wow!

Serving one’s Mistress should be this glorious!

An excellent companion to the first part!

You are celebrating the challenge and the reward of being human.

Our ability to connect with aspects of the Natural World and of our nature, that pull us into The Darkness; in fact, you befriended the inhabitants of The Darkness.

And yet,...

Your poem makes me think of sunflowers. They stand tall and face the sun every day, thus letting the shadows of their past fall behind them.

Few things compare to fresh ripe peaches at the end of summer. The soft fuzz on the skin, the smell, and that first juicy bite.

And peace to you, for a lovely first poem. Please write more.

Your words took me to many places I have fallen into, and came back out of. Water just being one. For taking me there, I grant 5 stars.

I am sure this is a mere coincidence, but I am finishing a new story where a gentleman opens the car door for a lady, and walks arm in arm along the waterfront. Those were the days, and perhaps those are the days.

Quote the Raven ForEverMore.... Neverore....

stunningly beautiful

fabulous!!!!

oh my !! You have me, this makes me wet with anticipation, I love it.

This is incredibly beautiful, warm and very sensual. I love this so much.

Sexy, 💋 and HOT. I really love this.

Very romantic, sexy & HOT!

Really HOT!! I love this.

I love naughty Limericks. Good job!!

You express your pain eloquently...his inability to CHOOSE how to treat each of you - those blurred lines between wife and lover, especially if he 'doesn't like her anymore'..he needs to just sort it out already. If she's his wife/housemate, and you are his lover then his treatment...

Yes, sir! The breakfast of champions!

Beautiful!!! Both words and sentiments!!!

Ukraine or Gaza???