All Comments on 'A Strange Planet called Zigrida Pt. 06'

Your sentences are mixed with narrative and what appears to be dialog without quotes. I stopped reading half a page in.

Your status as anonymous give's you little credibility as a critic to a story, who are you to give advice to these stories on Literotica. I see the thought police move into good stories to discredit them all the time. I am sure this person is not trying to win a Pulitzer prize writing erotic stories. Say who you are give him a chance to respond to you or leave the stories alone.

Status as Anonymous says to me you are a coward.

I found this story interesting and would love to see how it ends. Personally, I hope they all make it back home.

Yeah, like hiding behind a pen name is any less cowardly.