All Comments on 'Alice Wants to Watch Pt. 02'

by mjar65

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lc69hunter about 1 year ago

good second chapter

Anonymous11 months ago

Good premise.

Too automatic. Too mechanical.

Too predictavle.

Needs some reluctance that needed to be overcome.

Needed more in the way of her enjoying playing with his cock and balls.

Three stars.

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