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Click hereAttila could apparently feel it coming too, in the worshipful ripples of her cunt up and down his lazily thrusting beast. "Get set, Angel," he purred. "This bitch is almost ready for you."
"Ooh," Alpha Angel cooed, stepping closer. "Does that mean it's almost time to claim my reward?"
"Yep," Attila said. "Now get down there... and when I come, you kiss her."
"That's it?" Alpha Angel said. She looked up over the top of shivering Valkyrie's whimpering head, and frowned. "I want her as my total obedient bitch," she said, pointing at Valkyrie. "I thought you could make it happen. Like, by magic or something." She glanced at his subjugated models. They glared back, offended.
Attila shrugged. "It ain't quite like just mind control or anything," he admitted, pressing Valkyrie deep inside her trembling hips at the same time. "But the emotional shock of getting creamed when she can't resist, on top of everything else? It'll wreck what little is left of her will. Making her show love for you is the start. If you can't mold her yourself after that, then you're too dumb to rule her anyways."
Alpha Angel considered this, biting her lip, then shrugged. "Well, still sounds better than my alternate plan, which was just a ton of spankings," she admitted. "Alright, let's do this!"
Between them, Valkyrie whimpered. But she was otherwise unable to articulate her thoughts, and in any case the other two apparently already considered them irrelevant.
"Ready?" Attila gasped, thrusting away a little more forcefully as he got ready to spend.
"Absolutely," Alpha Angel cooed. Leaning back in close, she put her head near Valkyrie's. Reaching down she put a finger under Valiant Valkyrie's sweaty chin. Smirking, she slowly lifted Valkyrie's head up until it faced towards her. The cock-ravaged blonde blinked up at her blearily, sweat and tears running down her glorious masked face. Her mewling lips hovered just a centimeter from Alpha Angel's smirking mouth.
"Get ready," Alpha Angel cooed. Squirming helplessly, Valiant Valkyrie bleated mindlessly up at her. "Shhh..." Alpha Angel purred, bringing her lips even closer. She stroked her ravishing rival's head gently, like she was comforting a stupid yet lovable pet, and grinned. "Don't worry dear -- it will be all over for you soon," Alpha Angel promised.
To be continued...
Decision Time:
There will be two endings to this. Not whether or not Valkyrie wins - sorry, she's done for either way. Instead, the decision is whether Alpha Angel wins ('Ch. A') or both heroines lose ('Ch. B').
The 'divergence point' for the two endings is not really a single event or decision, but rather comes down to which of two possibilities you would prefer to be 'true' of Alpha Angel.
Do you think Alpha Angel has actually thought her plan all the way through, and is still really in control here? If so, then go with A.
Do you think Alpha Angel is just a dumb bimbo in way over her head, and has made bargains with things she doesn't really understand? If so, then go with B.
In terms of fetish content, A is obviously going to lean more towards femdom, and B towards mdom.
As mentioned at the start the 'canon' answer, going forward, is somewhere in the middle - while she will continue to be presented as an outsider and a rival figure to Valkyrie, she's never going to be this malevolent or sexually aggressive about it going forward. This is an exaggerated 'side story' that nevertheless gets her general personality and background established.
- COMMENTS
MarkVSharpabout 2 years agoAuthorHey, all. Both endings are now scheduled to drop 12/20, tomorrow as of this writing. (Also Zoo Ch7 drops at the same time so I guess it's going to be a red letter day for me.) Rather than A and B Lit staff elected to label them both Ch4, with Alt End 1 and 2; but the subtitles should make clear which is which. Hope they live up to everyone's expectations!
MarkVSharpabout 2 years agoAuthorNo worries. If you can’t visualize her, then that means I didn’t describe her well enough. Even with a language barrier, something as straightforward as what a main character looks like (particularly an intended lust object) should be really clear, so that’s my fault. I probably won’t be putting in a fresh description of her mid-story, but I’ll try to be careful to describe her clearly next time she shows up.
I will say, in my head, she’s one of the more clearly visually-defined heroines, albeit she does have a lot of extra accessories which doesn’t help. For her design, I basically just took an IRL model wearing a vertically-striped bikini, mentally added in blue thigh boots and a jacket, and then covered those in stars to hit my ‘has all the elements of the US flag’ quota. That’s basically it.
As for her role and who she is - well, as mentioned at the start, this is a bit of an exaggeration of what she is intended to be going forward; she is basically playing a villain in heroine’s clothing here. Who she is… well this is my fault too, but it’s on purpose this time, the story has been deliberately keeping that under wraps until the very end. If you can stand to, I would actually recommend trying to read through some of Part A when it drops, as it should give you some insight into what is actually going on with her. (Mild spoilers follow): you can skim the parts where she’s tormenting Valkyrie, because yeah there’s more of that. I don’t know where it will land in Lit’s page system, but skim ahead to when Alpha Angel and Valkyrie leave the Big Stallions’ building (just short of halfway through). [Edit - just checked my draft and the word ‘Emerging’ is used at the start of the section I am referring to and nowhere else, so searching for that word should take you there directly on whatever page it lands on]. Read through to the end of that scene. Then maybe skip ahead to the very end, and just read the last few paragraphs. That should give you a much better idea of what her whole concept is. Admittedly, burying that sort of reveal at the end is a little unfair; on the other hand it is kind of the whole conceit of the story.
If you don’t want to go through that, then don’t worry: what Part A strongly hints at, Part B proceeds to lay completely bare… very literally. Speaking of, Part B took a bit longer in revisions than I anticipated, it just got submitted today. That said, the delay came with some compensations: when I started, B was a little shorter than A; the final draft ended up being about 20% longer. So you got some extra material in exchange for the wait. Hope you enjoy whichever finale(s) you end up reading!
MarkVSharpabout 2 years agoAuthorNo worries. If you can’t visualize her, then that means I didn’t describe her well enough. Even with a language barrier, something as straightforward as what a main character looks like (particularly an intended lust object) should be really clear, so that’s my fault. I probably won’t be putting in a fresh description of her mid-story, but I’ll try to be careful to describe her clearly next time she shows up.
I will say, in my head, she’s one of the more clearly visually-defined heroines, albeit she does have a lot of extra accessories which doesn’t help. For her design, I basically just took an IRL model wearing a vertically-striped bikini, mentally added in blue thigh boots and a jacket, and then covered those in stars to hit my ‘has all the elements of the US flag’ quota. That’s basically it.
On the pink hair thing, I think I may have hit a cultural landmine without meaning to, I intended it as more of just an exotic coloration thing. As we shall see in Part B (mild spoilers), it’s not her real hair color. I mean obviously it’s not, but I mean it’s not the one she walks around with in her ‘real’ identity either, it’s explicitly a part of her disguise.
As for her role and who she is - well, as mentioned at the start, this is a bit of an exaggeration of what she is intended to be going forward; she is basically playing a villain in heroine’s clothing here. Who she is… well this is my fault too, but it’s on purpose this time, the story has been deliberately keeping that under wraps until the very end. If you can stand to, I would actually recommend trying to read through some of Part A when it drops, as it should give you some insight into what is actually going on with her. (Mild spoilers follow): you can skim the parts where she’s tormenting Valkyrie, because yeah there’s more of that. I don’t know where it will land in Lit’s page system, but skim ahead to when Alpha Angel and Valkyrie leave the Big Stallions’ building (just short of halfway through). [Edit - just checked my draft and the word ‘Emerging’ is used at the start of the section I am referring to and nowhere else, so searching for that word should take you there directly on whatever page it lands on]. Read through to the end of that scene. Then maybe skip ahead to the very end, and just read the last few paragraphs. That should give you a much better idea of what her whole concept is. Admittedly, burying that sort of reveal at the end is a little unfair; on the other hand it is kind of the whole conceit of the story.
If you don’t want to go through that, then don’t worry: what Part A strongly hints at, Part B proceeds to lay completely bare… very literally. Speaking of, Part B took a bit longer in revisions than I anticipated, it just got submitted today. That said, the delay came with some compensations: when I started, B was a little shorter than A; the final draft ended up being about 20% longer. So you got some extra material in exchange for the wait.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoYeah, sounds like mixed message, my bad. I'm actually not sure.
I am not into her coz i cant visualized her (maybe my problem not yours) or understand her role (heroine,villain,someone in between).
I kinde of hate her coz i have a big crush on VV, so I dont like to see some pink-haired upstart overshadows and humiliates her (villains have their way with her it is a fair game). That is why I want Alpha out of picture the hard way. Hope it make sense.
P.S. I can be hard to understand, coz English is not my native language. Sorry about that.
MarkVSharpover 2 years agoAuthor4th Anon: quick question, when you say you are not very impressed with Alpha Angel, does that mean generally not into her or that you actively want to see her get wrecked? Those are two very different pieces of feedback from my perspective!
