Defiled: Him

I always love HAPPY ENDINGS!!!!!! :-)

BRAVO!!!!!!!! A piece of ART!!! Magnificent!!!! :-)

@Anon, thx :)

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@Avemgn

I especially appreciate comments under this story, since it has so little love from people...

@Anonymous

I was planning on expanding it, but so much negativity was surrounding this story (harsh criticism from a friend) when I was writing it, that I kind of lost momentum and published it as it is now. Who knows, maybe in the future, I will revisit it.

Wow. That was a beautiful end to the series. Thank you so much for posting it. It is nice to see the characters all try to do the right thing. I really enjoyed this story.

I loved the stories. I wish you would give us an update on Nick and Tye and let us know if Jamie meets his dad. These characters are wonderful and I wish you would revisit them. I would also like to get a teams’ reaction of Tye being gay. I think that would be a good story line too. By the way I’m a straight female and I love your stories!

@Princera

I so appreciate it! Nobody commented on this story for the last 9 months, it such a nice surprise to receive a nice word here! :)

I loved it thank you so much for sharing it

@Anon, thank you, I'm happy you wanted to give it 5 stars!

I blocked it as I received a very critical opinion from a proofreader, now it's kinda pointless to unblock it as not that many people read it anyway so the votes won't be growing.

Why did you block votes here? Such a good story, wanted to give you five!

@SissyBoyAsia

Thank you for your another comment under my story, I'm glad you liked the sex scenes, I also liked them as they are partially based on factual events from my life. I was in a relationship with a person abused in the past and it influenced me heavily. I could never look at some topics and problems the same way again, after that relationship. I agree the story probably should have a bit longer ending, but I was so stressed, I didn't have an editor, it was very long already and I was pretty harshly criticized over the story by one person, that discouraged me on working on it more. But I hope you enjoyed it anyway.

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Dziękuję za kolejny komentarz pod moim opowiadaniem, cieszę się, że podobały Ci się sceny seksu, są częściowo oparte na faktach z mojego życia. Byłem w związku z osobą z trudną przeszłością i miało to na mnie duży wpływ. Po tym już nigdy nie mogłem spojrzeć na niektóre tematy i problemy w ten sam sposób. Zgadzam się, że historia powinna mieć trochę dłuższe zakończenie, ale byłem tak zestresowany, że nie miałem redaktora, a historia była już bardzo długa i zostałem też dość ostro skrytykowany za nią przez jedną osobę, co zniechęciło mnie do pracy nad nią. Ale mam nadzieję, że i tak ci się podobało :)

I got unexpected solutions, I didn't think that you would make so complicated the fate of the Heroes - Nick, Tye, Jamie and Noah. You have shown in all parts that the fate of man is mostly dependent on him and his willpower, character. And that what counts is true friendship, Love, trust in yourself, honesty, and feeling safe with the other person. I've grown very attached to the characters of Nick and Jamie, and in them I find myself and the experiences they've been through. You described the sex between Jamie and Noah wonderfully, I must say I got aroused reading it myself.

I will say that at the end I missed that Nick with Tye and Jamie with Noah did not meet together at a joint wedding or just sat together at one table.

Thank you so much for the wonderfully captivating and informative story of Nick, Tye, Jamie and Noah. Greetings from Warsaw, SissyBoy from Poland. (Asia)

Niespodziewane rozwiązania się doczekałem, nie myślałem że aż tak skomplikowane zrobisz losy Bohaterów - Nicka, Tye'a, Jamiego i Noah. Pokazałeś we wszystkich częściach że los człowieka jest w większości zależny od niego i jego siły woli, charakteru. I że liczy się prawdziwa przyjaźń, Miłość, zaufanie sobie, szczerość, i czucie się bezpiecznym przy drugiej osobie. Bardzo zżyłem się z postaciami Nicka i Jamiego w nich odnajduje siebie samego oraz doświadczenia jakie przeszli. Wspaniale opisałeś seks pomiędzy Jamiem a Noah, powiem że sam się podnieciłem czytając go. Powiem że na koniec jakby zabrakło Mi że Nick z Tye'm i Jamie z Noah razem się nie spotkali na wspólnym ślubie czy tylko zasiedli razem przy jednym stole.

Dziękuję bardzo za wspaniałą porywającą i pouczającą historię Nicka, Tye'a, Jamiego i Noah. Pozdrawiam z Warszawy, z Polski SissyBoy. (Asia)

Satisfying story, I liked the ending. Fair and square!

@Anon

Well, I mostly write gay stories and trans or crossdressers stories, so I rarely have born-female characters as main characters, but Literotica have many of them, so everybody will hopefully find what they search for with ease :) There are really wonderful authors on Literotica writing great straight stories - I just don't feel I am skilled enough to pull good straight story. Maybe one day.

But I have three new transwomen stories almost ready for publication now, so these women will definitely have a strong voice in my stories :D

Much better than most of the gay romantic stories I have read on this site. I want to thank you for not having a female character in the story with a voice.

@JipsyRose

Thank you so much, I appreciate other authors opinion so much, as I'm not a native speaker, so I'm very self-conscious about their comments :)

@Anonymous

I'm happy you liked it! I was really afraid, but maybe it was unnecessary! :)