- Gay Male
- Defiled: Him
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Click hereA new and better life was ahead of me.
Today... I became unbroken.
THE END
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Dear readers, thank you so much for staying with me till the end of the trilogy. That is the end of the story for Tye, Jamie, Nick and Noah.
The story was a challenge for me, and I struggled a lot, knowing many of you didn't like the second part. I recently received harsh criticism and almost gave up, but two of my closest people supported me and encouraged me to publish it, and I'm grateful. So - finally, I decided to add the third part for the few of my most hardcore readers who still asked for it, and I hope it was what you all expected.
Please -- leave me your opinions, you know I value them so much!
I hope the lack of an editor didn't destroy the experience of reading the story!
A. + G., thank you for your love and support!
- COMMENTS
Edeyabout 2 months agoAuthor@Avemgn
I especially appreciate comments under this story, since it has so little love from people...
@Anonymous
I was planning on expanding it, but so much negativity was surrounding this story (harsh criticism from a friend) when I was writing it, that I kind of lost momentum and published it as it is now. Who knows, maybe in the future, I will revisit it.
Avemgn3 months agoWow. That was a beautiful end to the series. Thank you so much for posting it. It is nice to see the characters all try to do the right thing. I really enjoyed this story.
Anonymous5 months agoI loved the stories. I wish you would give us an update on Nick and Tye and let us know if Jamie meets his dad. These characters are wonderful and I wish you would revisit them. I would also like to get a teams’ reaction of Tye being gay. I think that would be a good story line too. By the way I’m a straight female and I love your stories!
Edey5 months agoAuthor@Princera
I so appreciate it! Nobody commented on this story for the last 9 months, it such a nice surprise to receive a nice word here! :)
Edeyabout 1 year agoAuthor@Anon, thank you, I'm happy you wanted to give it 5 stars!
I blocked it as I received a very critical opinion from a proofreader, now it's kinda pointless to unblock it as not that many people read it anyway so the votes won't be growing.
Edeyover 1 year agoAuthor@SissyBoyAsia
Thank you for your another comment under my story, I'm glad you liked the sex scenes, I also liked them as they are partially based on factual events from my life. I was in a relationship with a person abused in the past and it influenced me heavily. I could never look at some topics and problems the same way again, after that relationship. I agree the story probably should have a bit longer ending, but I was so stressed, I didn't have an editor, it was very long already and I was pretty harshly criticized over the story by one person, that discouraged me on working on it more. But I hope you enjoyed it anyway.
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Dziękuję za kolejny komentarz pod moim opowiadaniem, cieszę się, że podobały Ci się sceny seksu, są częściowo oparte na faktach z mojego życia. Byłem w związku z osobą z trudną przeszłością i miało to na mnie duży wpływ. Po tym już nigdy nie mogłem spojrzeć na niektóre tematy i problemy w ten sam sposób. Zgadzam się, że historia powinna mieć trochę dłuższe zakończenie, ale byłem tak zestresowany, że nie miałem redaktora, a historia była już bardzo długa i zostałem też dość ostro skrytykowany za nią przez jedną osobę, co zniechęciło mnie do pracy nad nią. Ale mam nadzieję, że i tak ci się podobało :)
