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Click hereRead the continuation of this story in my 2022 submission for the National Nude Day challenge - Nude in the Bundu and its follow-up, Alone in the Bundu.
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- COMMENTS
Stoere_Boer27 days agoNot only are Frans and Dorothy's names familiar (Bundu stories), but I've also picked up Ingrid's name (Spring break series and Rudy series) along with her parents' names (Wilson and Desiree) from 'Rudy's fall'. Some integration between these three series of stories (Bundu, Spring Break and Rudy) can be intriguing. Can't wait to pick more names up.
SkaamPlaasMeisie6 months agoI thought the names Frans and Dorothy were familiar.
So Frans and Dorothy are quits, both cheated. Except, in Dorothy's case, it was unintentional. But then again, does cheating only start when there is penetration?
Good story though.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoWell written, but a bit long considering the content. I thought it had to be stand alone to be included in any of the contests? If it is part of a longer story, it will unfairly draw long standing fans. Good story tho.
Sunadmireabout 1 year agoAuthorExpatInParadise, there is no disconnect. I can only guess that you haven't read 'Nude in the Bundu'.
In 'Nude in the Bundu', the characters of Liz, and Marlene were introduced, with Jacob mentioned, but not with them in the Bundu.
Frans, who was 'Naked in the Bundu', and without Dorothy then joined Liz and Marlene. At the end of the work, Frans rushed back, hoping to reconcile with Dorothy, leaving Liz and Marlene 'Alone in the Bundu'.
I may have made it clearer that 'Alone in the Bundu, is a continuation of 'Naked in the Bundu', and not a continuation of 'Dorothy's Defloration'.
It is an interesting twist which you proposed to nominate an unrelated story as the April Fool's twist. I may try it out next year.
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ExpatInParadiseabout 1 year agoThis was a good story (even though it was an obvious twist when Jeff took her virginity) until you said that it is continued in the stories, Nude in the Bundu and Alone in the Bundu. Unless Dorothy and Frans changed their names to Lisa and Jacob and changed their background stories, then those stories are not related to this story. Or is that your April Fools joke for the contest? If so, you would have done better to just continue the story.
