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"I am so happy to hear that. Will we see you all again?"
All of us answer "Yes"
Both couples head out to our cars for the short drive back to the hotel. Between the early start of the work day, the drive down here, and then the exciting evening I for one am tired. I do not even thinking sex at the hotel. I am thinking I want that soft bed.
Our plan is to sleep until we wake up. All of us agree that it will be about 8AM latest. Text each other about meeting up for breakfast and plan the day from there. I sit back into my comfortable car seat and I realize just how tired I am. We make it up to the room. We each use the bathroom and before you know it we are fast asleep.
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I want to thank the people that are, reading & following my story. It is rather humbling that so many people are reading and giving my story arc favorable reviews. I want to truly say thank you.
As always please feel free to comment or make suggestions. There are still 2 other branches to this story I need to fully develop other than the weekend in Part 8 & 9. Part 9 will be the remainder of the weekend at the hotel. If you have any suggestions for a Labor I would be interested in hearing it. Who knows maybe with a little help Mary can make 20 Chapters.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI truly enjoy the story line. The only suggestion I have is to intermittently play up the women's age. I am thinking Mary is late 40s. I really enjoy older females and by older I mean 40s, 50s, and even some 60 year olds. Yes, I'm an older man but even in college I enjoyed 40 year old women. I enjoy this well written story.
Anonymousover 3 years ago20 is a lot and a worthy challenge. However your leading man is fading. Not sexually, or even as a likable character, those traits are still very strong. It’s just his bluster about being a tough guy, man in charge type is getting silly. Especially when, he’s just a beta bear who doesn’t know how to handle falling in love for the first time. Especially at an old age. I appreciate that Mary plays up to him and his ego, he needs this, like the woman bartender told him. But somewhere down the pike, one labor will be marriage, and hopefully before another labor is her changing his depends.
Looking forward to see what else you got.
