by Ranthoron
I have commented in Literotica maybe two or three times over many years of visiting the site, and one of those previous comments was submitted about the massacre of Palacechief's work by the non-writer whatever his name is who's had the gall to steal the Measuring My Cum title. STOP. You cannot write. You cannot hold a candle to Palacechief. Stop stealing his story title and story line.
You killed the original series. The characters seem totally off and Jacob's obsession with his mother's shapely ass is nowhere mentioned, just o mention a few obvious flaws. Please stop. Please do not continue the series.