My Best Friend is a Domme Ch. 21

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After about an hour Britney returned with Nikki, who was wearing the black jumpsuit she had worn when she entered the barn yesterday. I assume she didn't bring any other clothes with her than that jumpsuit. Nikki smiled shyly but genuine at us, standing next to Britney.

"Hey, everyone, may I have your attention for a second please?" Britney said using her teacher's voice. The conversation died and we all looked in their direction. "May I please introduce Nikki to you all? She'll be our honored guest for the rest of the weekend. And by guest I mean a real guest, so please don't include her in any form of play unless she really wants to join in. I want to make absolutely clear that she's not a slave anymore. She's a woman with a name, and her name is Nikki. Alright?"

From various places in the room, people said: "Hi Nikki," acknowledging the young woman standing next to Britney.

Nikki smiled at us. Her eyes smiled. She seemed happy to have been discharged from her slave role. I noticed her looking in the direction of the skinny girl, standing there in her cage. Her eyes had an apologetic look in them when they met the skinny girl's eyes. I realized they had shared a long and intense time with each other. Spending weeks in slavery together must have been way more intense and bonding than I would have guessed, having seen them just a few times. The skinny girl smiled at her though, and she briefly put her hand on her naked chest, right on top of her heart, as if she wanted to let her know she loved and respected her.

Britney and Nikki joined us in the seating area with the fireplace. Eve came by, asking Nikki what she wanted to drink and the girl immediately asked for a large cup of hot chocolate, as if she had been dreaming about the moment she could have that again during her weeks of slavery.

We chatted a little with her. She was nice, sweet and shy. It dawned on me she wasn't the brightest girl I'd ever met, but I liked her. And I liked how supportive Britney was towards her and how much she showed genuine respect to her. It was nice to see.

"I'm really tired," Patty softly said to me after a little while. "It's not that late, maybe I'll go and lay down for an hour or so before dinner."

I looked at her. Her eyes looked warm and bright, but her face had looked a little tired the whole afternoon, ever since her long session with Sue.

"Of course Miss," I said, smiling lovingly at her.

"Would you come with me for a couple of minutes, to tuck me in?" she asked.

"I'd love to," I said, meaning every single word.

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AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

I want so much more. Please

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Please tell me there is another chapter in the works

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

the greatest story i have read, more please.

CynavoxCynavox6 months ago

While I realize this story is old, it's new to me. I respect the end that the story has reached. The one thing the audience needed, in my opinion, was closure on how patty really felt about Conrad and I feel we got that with the whole boyfriend thing. I couldn't be happier (aside from wishing there was more)

northirishdivernorthirishdiver6 months ago

Great story hopefully not the end

HeartfeltmanHeartfeltman8 months ago

Ha!

I can only wonder if the author checks in from time to time to see the comments by those who have traveled the past 21 chapters, completely enthralled with the kinky romance between Patty and Conrad.

I could think of better ways to end such a tale, but I learned to let go and let the author call the shots. This was a superb reading experience. As someone who wants to write fiction in a similar vein, this has raised the bar for what I want to publish here.

This was a blessing and a curse. I doubt I'll find many stories that resonated with me as much.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is how your going to end this great story, after 21 great changes? That sad!!!!

McFly1234McFly123411 months ago

I wish it would continue as I would like to know what happened to Patty and how the dynamic really does play out long term.

Wandering_MinstrelWandering_Minstrel12 months ago

It does seem as though this is where the author intends to end this story given the length of time since this chapter was posted. It may not be the end many would have desired, but it is the author's story. --

Perhaps by describing this chapter as "breaking down" the author intends to foreshadow the resolution to a driving conflict within Patty. A resolution that represents the opening of a new chapter in her life. It would not be surprising, therefore, to see the author end the narrative here as the story they set out to tell has come to an end.

The tone set in certain passages of this chapter have an undertone that suggests a restlessness with Patty's current lifestyle. A restlessness that appears to be linked to processing traumatic events from her past. The chapter ends with Patty feeling tired even though "It's not that late". Under the circumstances it seems quite poignant to end the story with the lines:

"Would you come with me for a couple of minutes, to tuck me in?" she asked.

"I'd love to," I said, meaning every single word.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It's been 6 months since we last heard from TwistedDejavu...

From the way this series has been written and the sensitivity displayed by the author, I suspect TwistedDejavu is a woman. For some reason, I wonder if there is an autobiographical aspect to the story. Perhaps it has been written for some form of catharsis. If so, the story may have reached a point at which going forward may become too painful to continue.

My qualifications for the above are precisely zero. It is pure speculation. I just don't understand why such an exceptional story would just suddenly be dropped.

What I do know I don't get emotional and this story has brought me to tears a number of times. I miss Patty and Conrad.

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