All Comments on 'Venise - Ten Years Later Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Loved venise and now the 10 years later....I detect English words and tho it's set America, it's a hybrid and so nice Not to read the word "Pussy " as it means a woman's vulva, the outer labia lips, vaginal entrance and Vagina!! The inner lips are called nether (as in nether here nor there?!!) And the clit can be called a bean or nub but I am surprised that they haven't named that as the Pussy clit!! Hard to know which bit of the "pussy" there on about when, eg " my cock is stroking her pussy" Yes, but where? Noticed that since using our word cock(but hardly dick or prick) and now nicking cunt, but not twat, snatch (sometimes slit.) Anyway porn made American slang words mainstream and European porn has to use those words (don't want to confuse any Americans now do we!!) So America has won on the language front but it's termed "globalisation" for huge American firms making a killing in various countries and hardly paying any taxes, it feels more like colonialism though. Enough said...looking forward to part 3 of the return of venise and I have never understood why this author hasn't more followers, he's good and better than some of the drivel I have read who have more followers, some people don't know good writing even if it hit them over the head, like a 6x4 of pine!!

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Vitavie is of mixed European extraction. She studied maths and art history in Germany. After a less than glorious employment history, through lack of motivation, but a lively social life, she married a business man and converted to being a socialite. She writes essentially in...