All Comments on 'Yes, Sir Ch. 04: Other People'

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Lonely_readerLonely_reader5 months ago

Another beautiful installment, the depth of the characters is growing and so their reasons, their feeling towards each other becoming - it seems - more than "shallow" lust.

Can't wait to read more, 5/5 would recommend.

x_KnightWriter_xx_KnightWriter_x5 months ago

There are badly written stories that are basically rewritten paragraphs of atrociously trite, scripted, unrealistic porn…. and then there are stories like this.

It’s not wham-bam filth, it builds and develops, and throughout, it delivers.

There is a grittiness to the characters - you can almost feel the grey clouds and complexity of real-life - the characters have soul and feel real; and that makes everything relatable. This is much more than just erotica, this is beautiful in its sadness, anger, frustration, hope, love and lust for two characters caught in a juxtaposition to each other.

Thank you for writing, can’t wait for the next step in their journey.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I need part 5 IMMEDIATELY

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Please write part 5 soon. I need these two to get together

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please write part 5. I need to know what happenes with Kayla and Angus

PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Love this series. Can wait for the next few parts!!

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