made me so horny started humping a pillow and fingering myself
Please, please, please write Part 2... I would love to see what they'd be like together when he's not getting paid... Especially if he stop's being a prostitute so he can be with her...
Please please please keep writing
Great for fucking. Bad for driving
Or in those days what mameries!
A beautiful and passionate story. Can't wait to read more of your work.
...gawd I loved re-reading this! Wonderful. Beautiful. Awesome. :).
This was rubbish. No idea why my story was rejected when this garbage with poor grammar, non existent spelling, and a crap storyline was published.
Can I have his number too? Goddamn, I need a man I can call for 'more than deflorations' as well. Very sexy story.
I was so caught up in the story. That must be the sign of a good story.
The ( your ) story was so hot that half way thru I was jacking off my hardon cock, your story I hope was true ... please keep writing more.
I am so freaking hard s I am sending this !
I really enjoyed your story. The characters were very well drawn, and quite realistic. I would like to see more of this tale!
Absolutely terrible. Ridiculous.
Usually I defend you from the grammar trolls because of your high quality writing. This, unfortunately, is not representative of your usual quality. Only 1 star from me this time.
Reading this was so "liveable" - pulling me into the story and making it seem more memory than fiction. This was so believable that it might have been a journal entry. I thoroughly enjoyed this reading.
Through your use of well placed humor and wit, careful construction of your main characters, and we'll paced timing of events, you've created a story that represents what many would consider a perfect experience. It's so well structured that it feels like we're experiencing the joy and happiness right along with the narrator.
I thank you for sharing this amazing story - it gave me a chance to vicariously relive my first time in a much more satisfying manner (my experience was at a young age, both of us over eager, making it a rushed, stressful experience).
Technically speaking, your story is wonderful. I only noticed a few errors and typos - minor issues at worst. I am impressed with the way you gave each personality enough time to exists and become familiar to us, the readers, so that the story, as I mentioned before, is deeper, meaningful, and satisfying. Not too long, not too short, just right.
Thanks again! I hope to read more from you.
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