i am so impressed, it made me wanna cry. brings back memories of the first time i truly had sex.
The teacher's ongoing reluctance makes the story that much hotter. All three teens are memorable, but the combination of the two true vixens and the sweeter Chloe is just the right recipe.
Only thing that made me wince a little: Bletchflap? Even J. K. Rowling would have passed on that one.
You wrote this with intelligence, wit, humor and emotions. I love it. I'd suggest that you write more and maybe try wattpad as a platform, because am sure you have many stories to be told.
Once again, wonderfully written.
Asking permission after he's already inside her? She repeatedly told him to stop during his unasked for foreplay. This is a male rape fantasy and belongs under the nonconsent category. Completely offensive.
You seem more angry at Jesse than anything. You obviously still love her and perhaps feel violated yourself via her actions. Too bad. Either take her in, forgive her and help her to a new life, or walk away forever.
It would be an insult to a wanker to call the writer one
Shes so smart but does not worry about getting knocked up the writer is a wanker
Don't you just love naïve?? Something tells me she WILL appear the next day in equally "inappropriate" dress, probably wondering what a spanking feels like and how it might affect her arousal..... and I'm betting when red-bummed and bent over, she will make lots of noise as she is 'ravished'..... now that the bothersome cherry has been popped, I am sure Angela will become a MUCH more interactive flat mate.... especially if, to her own surprise, a publically spanked bottom lights her fire....don't you??
yes, i remember high-school, and all the clicks and gossip. The story was very believable, and I'm sure our hero, Louis was grateful that his mother taught him to keep his room clean. I liked that they did not get caught, that would have ruined the moment and the story. Great work.
Most definitely continue this please so Cheryl comes out on top.
That was an amazing ending. I didn't see anything like that coming. Now I'm sitting at my desk at work, trying not to show any tears. Thank you for sharing that-you have a real gift.
This wasn't written, it was vomitted.
Please, erase all other writing. Do not spew it out onto us.
Garbage, and I second the previous comment.
where was his first time? this story looks unfinished.
U r sick
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