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Click here"She said... uh..."
"That she was always attracted to you?" Denise asked. "That was a lie."
"What do you mean?"
"Lisa wasn't exactly telling you the truth. She always wanted you to herself. But she just didn't want to admit that, even to herself. That's why she didn't want me to be with you."
I wondered how Denise knew what Lisa and I talked about. My door was closed the entire time. The few minutes between Lisa leaving my room and Denise appearing was too short to summarize our conversation.
"She, uh, already told me that," I said.
"No Ken, she said she has always liked you. But she only realize how much she wanted to be with you after she saw how affectionate we got. She was jealous. That's why she was acting this way."
Was Lisa lying to me? I was much more inclined to believe Lisa over Denise. Though if I was being fair to Denise, Denise was always upfront and honest with me. When Denise didn't want to tell me something, she would tell me that instead of lying to me. The earlier conversation with Lisa made me realize Lisa wasn't always transparent with me.
"Why are you telling me this?" I asked.
"Because she ratted me out. So I'm paying her back."
"Uh, I... I don't want to get into the middle of you two. And I hope you two won't fall out because of me, please."
"We're not falling out. We're just punishing each other," Denise said. "In a good way."
"How's that good?"
"After that, once we stopped being pissed at each other, we're going to have steamy makeup sex and get even closer with each other."
"That... very weird."
She laughed. "So do I get a thank-you sex now?"
I was a little reluctant at first, but when she turned around, and slid her boy-shorts panties down her legs, then lay down on the bed naked right in front of me, I eventually gave her a thank-you sex.
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It took another two days for me to fully break out of my depression.
Maybe I was biased, but having a lot of sex helped. Perhaps I could write a research journal on how sex can cure depression.
When I thought life was starting to get good again, there was a crinkle that kept growing.
I had thought that all the tensions between Denise and Lisa would dissipate after I confessed everything to Lisa.
But instead, the tension only grew. Before, it was just Lisa being frustrated. Now they seemed to be visibly at odds with each other.
As far as I can tell, they were still best friends. Most of the time, they were happy with each other. They still had sex with Tony and me. But I could feel trouble brewing underneath the surface.
I thought Lisa had mostly forgotten about wanting to punish Denise, but after one small tiff between them, Lisa said she couldn't wait to punish Denise.
When I asked Lisa about it, she simply replied, "You'll see."
It was starting to get unbearable for me. I was waiting for tectonic plates to eventually collide and for the volcano to erupt.
- COMMENTS
Aredia20 days agoLove this story. Your characters are well-developed and believable; your grammar and spelling spot on. These things are important - the difference between a paved road and a goat-trail. Both will take you someplace, but the ride quality ...
Laying out all the anxieties that can occur with sex, and the differences between sex and friendship - all stuff I wish I'd known when I was an awkward teen fumbling about trying to learn about girls.
Thank-you
Bonebibrain3 months agoOKOK Albert E. You may be smart BUT… you need to stop thinking so much! Didn’t everybody say that already? Yes great sex is the second best cure all… the first is always good friends! DUDE, you have a twofer… the hottest girls, the best friend and a creative mind to express yourself! I wish I could have it all like u do! Great story, thoughtful, loving and sad/funny and damn near brilliant! You obviously have connected to me and I think almost all the readers! Write a erotic book, I only want to be ur proofreader 😊🤔😊 definitely ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥🥵🥵🥵💗💗💗 as previously stated, names, numbers, addresses, SS #, and where I can meet them! Hell, after reading ur story I want to meet you! 🤔 oh, does Lisa or Denise need their feet massaged? Sorry I digressed… definitely looking forward to more…please keep writing! BBB
Anonymous4 months agoThis is just an incredible story. Thank you very much for writing it. It brought tears to my eyes in the best possible way.
KyleTayleeover 1 year agoAuthorAuthor's note: For readers who are wondering how the story has been progressing.
The time-skip and ‘the Incident’ are something I’ve planned right from the beginning. It’s a pivotal chapter with a lot of subtext. I had actually wanted it to happen earlier (in terms of word count) but I felt the need to showcase the relationship between Ken, Lisa and Denise first. I also wanted the readers to know (and care) more about the MCs before introducing more girls.
I didn’t want the story to be just about “I had sex with this girl, then bang two more girls, then an orgy with twelve girls. I’m a sex god.” It gets boring after a while. RSI still has a lot of sex with different girls (he’s going to be a sex instructor after all). But I don’t want it to be that kind of stroke story. There are already plenty of such stories out there.
After posting chapter 3, I was toying with the idea of delaying the events of chapter 4 to show more of Ken’s growth.
But the reader in me went, “50k words and still no anal sex? Harry Potter had defeated Voldemort in Book 1 earlier than that! And Ken still only had sex with two girls? You call yourself a smut writer?!”
The writer in me also wanted Ken to grow up faster so I can get into more of the good stuff, including the changing relationship with the girls.
In my personal life, I had attended a lot of sex parties and they were a lot of fun (See my profile). I want to write about those.
So in the end, I decided to do a little exposition with more telling (rather than showing) to quicken the pacing a little. I wasn’t sure if the readers want to read a day-by-day account of how Denise orchestrated Ken’s development.
At the same time, I’m also toying with the idea of including more backstories of what happened during the one-month time skip.
I had actually written out a few scenes of Denise teaching Ken how to kiss and how to eat a girl out etc, but then it was starting to feel like I was writing a sex manual without advancing the plot or revealing more of the character. I was also planning to showcase all these when Ken becomes an SI, teaching another girl all these. So I cut these out to avoid repetition.
Let me know if there’s any part you’re interested to read in the one-month time skip.
I hope you’re enjoying the story and the pacing so far. Feedbacks and comments are always welcome.
Anonymousover 1 year agoPlease keep writing!! Ken's anxieties and issues are far more common than people realize. It felt good to see that represented. I hope you don't stop and I get to read a lot more
