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Click here"Yes, ma'am," said Molly with a defeated sigh. At least bedtime spankings were fairly tolerable.
Portia held her there in a tender cuddle until Molly had fully recovered from the experience.
"I hope you've learned a good lesson," said Portia, still gently playing with Molly's hair.
At this point, Molly wasn't so sure what lesson she'd learned. The big one was that Portia and Asher were polar-opposite sexual partners. A very confident dominant versus an eager to please and shy submissive. Molly began to realize she deeply desired both types.
- COMMENTS
OrvokkiA5 months agoReally LOVE this story (chapters 1-3) both from Dom’s and sub’s points of views! All the details are so deliciously written. I enjoy every bit of it! Absolutely waiting for Veronica’s punishment.
Anonymous8 months agoBy Clarence I meant Nick.Clarence Darrow was tne defence lawyer in the Scopes trial in the 1920's,look it up on Wikipedia.As to what the author said about safe words etc.I view BDSM as akin to serious amature sport,you do not have to participate but once a 'game'starts you are in it until the end.
RainyDayPen8 months agoAuthorYou all are really making my day with your lovely comments. I'm so pleased you're enjoy the story and the style. I've been reading all your thoughts and some of the ideas suggested were already planned so I hope you'll enjoy those scenes when they arrive. I had better get back to writing. :)
Anonymous8 months agoReally thankful for Asher getting his name cleared... Your descriptions were very elegant, it truly did make my heart sink, hard. I haven't been so attached and immersed in a story for so long, I love your articulation. And the VERY subtle development of the world and Portia.
Anonymous8 months agoHave we seen the last of Veronica?There could be some scene where she makes a play for Clarence,but,of course,is foiled by Portia,with Mollie's aid.
Anonymous8 months agoYour writing style is so vivid - I could really picture myself as Molly, wishing she could sink into the ground. Glad to see that justice prevailed and looking forward to a good comeuppance.
RainyDayPen8 months agoAuthorThank you both for your feedback! Glad you are enjoying this, Michael! It makes me so happy that others find this story fun to read. I do suspect in this kind of dystopic economy the cleaners won't have much choice. :) I will have a next part coming up in a couple of weeks if all goes to plan, and in one week a new part to the previous series.
Anonymous8 months agoThis author really has an EXCELLENT style adapted to his story. The descriptions are perfect. Hopefully the rest won't take too long to come. BIG CONGRATULATION à Mr. RainyDayPen.
MICHAELG19638 months agoAmazing story and poor Asher. I hope the next installment includes Veronica punishment with Molly and Asher as witnesses
