Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereMistressK: Well, it is more fun when you come up with the ideas. And I will tell you if I accept. But since I need to rein you in otherwise you would be begging to cum at the dining room table right now because you can't help yourself, I am going to limit you to 1 new rule, and 1 new task, ok? Now what will you do to cum, you stupid slut. Keep rubbing that clit and start playing with those fun bags of yours.
Beth moaned loudly now. Amy definitely heard her through the wall and was laughing hysterically. Her right hand was making her pussy squelch and her left hand started rubbing her throbbing nipples and it made her grunt with lust as she almost went over the edge.
Beth: How about one rule from me, one from you. And two tasks. And fuck it, you please give me another task too!
MistressK: Fine, fine. You can't hide from who you are, slut. Just a horny, exhibitionist, masochistic, slut that needs to be humiliated. Ok, what is your rule?
Beth was frantic now. This new attention to her nipples had her right on the edge as she made herself look even more ridiculous as she started to thrust her hips to hump the air. Beth growled like a woman possessed. The constant teasing, her dirty sticky skin, smeared writing, and the constant humiliation had her in a zone like she never experienced before. MIstressK's words only inspired her. "She's right" Beth thought. "This is who I am. This is where I need to be. To be exposed and humiliated." Beth growled as she blurted out the first rule that came to her head
Beth: Bare cunt on a car seat (desperately).
MistressK: What does that mean? And be careful, I haven't given you permission to have that orgasm that you are about to have.
Beth: (moaning in desperation) It means that no matter what I have to have my bare ass and pussy directly on the car seat whenever I am in my car. No matter what I am wearing. Jeans, I have to pull them and my panties down. Skirt, flip it up in back and down with the panties. Direct contact at all times.
MistressK: Ok slut. That sounds good. Sounds harder than you think it will be. And I will add my rule to go along with that. You will never clean your car seat. The whole interior actually, besides garbage you can pick up. No matter what. You keep rubbing that bare twat against that hot leather seat all summer and you will be the girl whose car smells like sex. The windows never go down.
Beth: Oh god yes!! That is a good one. I want to cum all over those seats right now to get started. Please mistress.
MistressK: Now your first task. It had better be good if you want to cum.
Beth: Ummph. Ok. Tonight is garbage night, and my mom will roll the cans to the curb right after dinner so she can settle in front of the tv. How about after she is settled, I gather up a small bag of garbage from my room, then tell her I am going to run it out to the curb. I will then strip naked in the garage and bring the bag to the curb, drop it in, and come back. All walking slowly.
MistressK: I would love to see you crawl, but baby steps, slut. Make sure you throw out one of your baggy shirts and you have a deal.
Beth: Yes mistress. Oh yes, I will throw out a shirt to go with my outfit that is already in the garbage. Oh please. May I cum?
MistressK: Not yet. Task 2!
Beth: Oh god. Ok. How bout you get me drunk again and make me do another video. Keep me horny all goddamn day then have me steal wine bottles again naked like the other night. That was brilliant. Getting me horny and drunk made me let my guard down to make that awful video. But do it again. Only tease me more. Make me do even more humiliating things. Get me drunker, stoned even. And make me agree to do horrible ridiculous things. Make a complete ass out of me for hours. Then have me come up with a crazy humiliating script that makes the video I made Friday night look like a Disney commercial. If I don't make it humiliating enough, I won't get to cum for a week! Oh and do it on a school night too, so I can be all hung over the next day in school looking like shit and maybe make some more bad decisions.
Beth: Please, now, give me your task and let me cum. I am begging you.
MistressK: Well slut, those are acceptable. However, I will be keeping my task for you for the end of the week. Let's just say you will enjoy your graduation day like the exhibitionist slut that you are.
Beth: Anything... please.
Beth sat there openly wailing now as she played with herself. Not because she was mortified about being naked and masturbating on video for a blackmailer anymore. But because she had exhausted every ounce of desperation she had in begging for this orgasm and she couldn't take it anymore. She was going to cum. She needed to.
MistressK: You may cum for me, slut.
And she did. Beth would not remember much of the next ten minutes, a fact cruelly driven home when the girls replayed the video of her latest embarrassing show. Beth started to moan pretty loud as her legs shot straight out, her toes curled for the camera, and a waterfall seemed to gush out of her pussy. Beth came like a maniac as she writhed back and forth on the floor, rolling around in her own cum and making her sticky body even more nasty.
She no doubt had more than the one orgasm she was allowed but the girls gave her a pass as they laughed at Beth's naked body rolling back and forth as she fucked herself with her fingers. She was licking her tits, bouncing her ass cheeks off the floor,and rubbing her fluids on her body.
The girls conversed about how much they were going to enjoy Beth's naked walk later. They were excited to see her debut her new wardrobe at home during dinner. And they mapped out the rest of their last week of high school ever, and how they were going to use every moment they could to maximize their amusement with their toy, drive her further under their control, and push Beth deeper into her own black hole of humiliating lust.
Ok. That is it. I was planning on getting her to Monday morning before school during this chapter but you have all waited long enough so I cut it off. The next chapter will cover Beth's last week of school and graduation. I have some good ideas for that, but please keep the suggestions coming. I read them all, even if I don't respond to all of them. I will also start posting the existing rules before each chapter as it will start to get confusing. Plus it will serve as a good reminder to me what the hell is going on.
- COMMENTS
Submissive_Linda4 months agoSomehow this chapter is the lesser one for me. Hard to pinpoint why, perhaps I expected more fun with the WHORE in the shopping mall, showing of her ass. Excellent new rule for the car!
Medussa5511 months agoI'm loving Kim, clearly far cleverer than the other two and I think she is starting to take control over the other two. Amy is becoming a liability though and is in danger of ruining the whole plan. The movie theatre was excellent. Just a shame Beth wasn't made to go over and speak to the Soda girl at the end and take her humiliation to another level.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI don't care about believability as long as it's a good story/ entertaining which this story is. Also, thank you Drazenpet23 for this story and keeping everyone updated with the comments
Anonymousover 1 year agoI'll agree with the believability club. The theater scene really pulled me out of the story because it just was so far out there that it made no sense, imo. Spilling one cup on yourself is fine, but two? And getting it literally all over yourself? That's something that gets security called because it makes Beth look like she's on drugs or something. And the people working there would be pissed about having to clean up the mess, so they'd be looking for a little payback.
There's a big difference between suspending disbelief when things are pushing the envelope a bit, and just plain shredding the suspension with over-the-top antics that would realistically cause problems. So far, Beth's story has pushed the envelope, but has been entirely within the realm of believability, except for the theater scene. It kind of reminds me of the first few chapters of the Open Invite story, and I hope it doesn't go off the rails like that one did.
Mslave36over 1 year agoI agree the theater scene was unique and a great humiliating component. Its been a great peak into the future college scenes, which Im sure will be more public and amazing!!
Anonymousover 1 year agoI'm also surprised ppl didn't like the movie theatre. That was one of my favorite parts, haha. Was hoping she'd be making her way back there and having to interact with the girl behind the counter some more.
xabbu123over 1 year agoIt's interesting reading all the comments... I personally loved the movie theatre. Not because it was inherently hot. I mean, the act itself isn't... But because it eroticises "fucking with Beth". I really loved that it was humiliation for humiliations sake and that it got Beth hot because of that use of force. It was inspired and weird and wonderful.
Mslave36over 1 year agoI think your "sick mind" is what everyone loves, the stories have been amazing, the realism aspect, dont worry about it! Jutlst keep doing what your doing! Everyone loves it. I personally cant wait for the other story either! That one Im sure will be great also! Was hoping it was already pending. But im sure it will be worth the wait. Just follow your sick twisted mind! ;)
Anonymousover 1 year agoYes!!!! Definitely agree 100% you are the one writing the story. Feedback is always good but at the end of the day it is just like you said a fantasy erotica story and what you describe as your buttons is exactly why many loved your story. A lot of us want to read what will happen next and for poor Beth to be more and more humiliated. Keep up the good work we
wait eagerly for the next chapter and this new story.
eroticaclassicover 1 year ago''public nudity, obscene clothing rules, and humiliation'' yes, please!
Drazenpet23over 1 year agoAuthorThanks for your patience. Got delayed, but still only have a little bit left before posting. I also appreciate all of the feedback and debate over this story. I see that some didn't care much for the movie theater scene. It was just something that popped into my head when I was thinking about making her uncomfortable and nervous.
I will also say this as nice as I can, not all will get their way. I have been urged by many to keep the story believable. First, I'm not so sure it is all that believable now. But it will get less and less believable as the story progresses and it gets worse for Beth. This is a fantasy erotic literature site and I would rather suspend some belief and explore my sick mind than write in reality. My buttons are complete public nudity, obscene clothing rules, and humiliation. I plan on using those themes heavily on poor Beth and the other character I am working on. I hope this doesn't turn anyone off, but if I am going to spend countless hours writing 100 pages typed for a story, it is going to check off my boxes. In this case it is going to mean less and less clothing for poor Beth.
But as always all feedback is welcome. Thanks again for your patience. Almost done.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThere's a big difference between good fiction and bad - it's gotta be believable within the confines of the story.
There's a reason why we talk about the "suspension of disbelief" like we do. So far, everything Beth's gone through has been believable. Far-fetched, sure, and that scene in the theater really did pull me out of the story simply because it was so inane. But... we are still within the bounds of normalcy and that's what makes the tale so compelling.
Going public and ruining Beth will absolutely reflect on the family as a whole. A wealthy CEO of a father is going to be watched by everyone, including his enemies who would love to see him taken down a peg. That Beth might have a different last name isn't material because you can bet everyone around her will know exactly who she's related to, even if only by marriage. Amy has to know this stuff will blow back on her and her father if it gets any publicity, and there's just no way she'd want that. Plus, I don't think she'd really want to kill her golden goose. Again, it's that suspension of disbelief. Would a normal socially-conscious teenage girl want to be even tangentially associated with the town bicycle? Would she want to be known to be living in the same house, sharing meals, etc? She might be angry right now, but not to the extent she wants to be tarred with the same brush, or see her father brought down by the scandal.
By keeping the situation relatively secret, they can easily extend their use of Beth out for years. Opening an OnlyFans account, for example, allows them to make money while embarrassing Beth even if she were wearing a mask. Working at a gloryhole place on the weekends would protect the family name while also serving to make money for the crew of antagonists while also driving Beth further into the ground. No jeopardy to the family name, the loved father or Amy's status in the community.
I do like the idea of making Beth get laser hair removal as a choice of her own when has to make a punishment worse herself. Maybe have MistressK tease her with the idea until Beth is so worked up she begs to make an appointment to permanently mark herself. It's one of those things that works within her kink but wouldn't stand out as anything bad to the uninitiated. Same could be said for the nipple rings which I think are going to happen.
In the story, we know why Beth hates those things so much, but anyone not 'in the know' wouldn't see them as particularly awful or damaging to anyone's social status.
I wouldn't mind seeing a return of that hypnotism program again. If it left Beth open to a mild suggestion like feeling good to listen to MistressK, that's something that could be reinforced or built on. Very much looking forward to the next chapter!
