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I looked at Snowy as she looked at me. We both nodded at each other and stepped inside. We spent our Thanksgiving Day helping feed the hungry and the homeless. We sat with them and talked with them, we even had Thanksgiving Dinner with them. In the end, we found something to do more special and rewarding that day than we ever dreamed we could. We had a wonderful night followed by a great day. That morning was the last morning I ever spoke to Chrissy, the holiday phone calls and texts ended as time, along with Snowy and I moved forward.

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peaches_n_dreamspeaches_n_dreams8 months ago

Wow! Loved reading the continuing education of baby Snowy. Hot hot descriptions of varied range of lovemaking. Thank you for writing and posting this.

Olivia_aliveOlivia_alive8 months ago

Phew what a second chapter. Great to see how the characters have developed and the ‘testing’ of Snowy by this ‘old flame’

Loved the descriptions of the previous girls….hehe…

Great storytelling, thank you….

UhlBWettUhlBWett8 months agoAuthor

As a Co-writer of this story, I watched it closely during the first few hours it posted. I watched the very first person to rate it, give it a single star. After several weeks, working on it during the evenings and on weekends, after 18,000 words, covering 31 Pages, it got a single star. I thought to myself, really? But then I started thinking about things. The story was probably rated by someone who (A) doesn't have enough writing skills to even complete their own user profile, or (B) had an axe to grind over something that might have taken place in chat, or (C) can't read at all and were confused by all the big words. I never expect a high score on one of my stories, but a little consideration and respect for the time and effort put forth would have been nice. For those of you that choose to rate this story or anyone else's, keep those things in mind. This story has been torpedoed to the point that it will likely never recover. I'll accept that, but the next time you rate a story, anyone's story, be kind. There will be parts of every story that someone doesn't approve of or isn't into. Authors put themselves out there, they make themselves vulnerable to any "erotica expert" who has ever opened an adult magazine or visited an adult site. There is not a story on this site, regardless of how bad someone thinks it is, that truly deserves a single star. I want to encourage my fellow writers to remain strong and keep writing no matter how much negativity they face...

veryearlyriserveryearlyriser8 months ago

Wow what a second part. I enjoyed this as much as the first despite being shocked all over again.

I found it very interesting about the use of the word ‘sir’ and the expected behaviour of a sub and it has helped me understand some of the things I see in the various rooms on Lit.

I very much enjoyed the description of the girls from their respective apothecary bottles…..

The scenes where Chrissy was involved I found hard to take in places but again enjoyed this part of the story. Again all the erotic action is very exciting…..mmmmmm

Finally I had to smile to myself as one of my best friends in real life is called Helen Waite….hehe…

Thank you again you two. Very well written and most enjoyable.

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