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Click hereFirstly, he had now been officially informed that he'd been 'drummed out' of the Carlton Club, his membership cancelled with full effect. Another item of correspondence was from the Royal Commission. Again, fully officially, he was no longer Sir Archibald Manningham, but, once more with immediate effect, he was now simply Mr Archibald Manningham. His treasured Knighthood was GONE!
In fact, of course, for some time to come he was not even Mr Manningham, but Male Prisoner Number 643862129 Manningham, Archibald Terrance. And for that time, he actually did have a roof over his head, if not one he would have chosen. But the final letter he'd received was from Lady Eleanor's solicitor. Her divorce petition had been delivered.
Meaning, with the estate that he USED to live in being from HER side of the family, when his sentence was finished and he did leave this prison, he'd need to find somewhere else to live. Could this day get any worse?
And his 'partner in crime' wasn't having a good day either, although it was just a 'normal' day for Madeline Fortesque. For at almost the exact same time as Sharon and Celia were being chained to the bed and each other in a joyful manner and for PURE pleasure, Tina Maddison was tying her 'bitch' to the lower bunk to shag. As she had done to her for almost every night since Madeline had 'moved in,' Fortesque having been forced to 'dress up' in the cheap lingerie that Sharon had provided.
Therefore, the two prisoners did NOT enjoy that day and night. Meaning, good Ladies and Gentlemen, that maybe, just maybe, they had learned a lesson in life.
SO, CRIME DOESN'T PAY AFTER ALL!
- COMMENTS
LunaDoggy4 months agoAuthorThank you for your very kind words, my friend. I note your comment about my use of capitals, which you mentioned in another of my stories. And is a bad habit of mine. Please bear in mind that all the stories that are being published now are already written, so i have published 'as is' complete with the caps. Perhaps i'll try to pay more attention to this in future. One thing though, bearing in mind i'm a 'newbie' here, i can't see how to use italics. Perhaps a moderator can direct me there.
Anyway apart from that complaint, and as i said in the other thread constructive criticism is always welcome, i'd glad you enjoyed reading my story. Which is, the main point of writing it, i guess.
Submisky354 months agoThis "stand alone" story, as the author refers to it was marvelous. Certainly long enough that it could well have been divided into several chapters, but captivating throughout its entirety. LunaDoggy has an excellent way of describing people and events. The author's knowledge of, and therefore descriptions of the legal and police proceedings, is considerable. The time and effort required to write this was considerable, which I understand, having written a 33 chapter story for Literotica myself. I applaud you, LunaDoggy.
One suggestion, if I may. The use of capital letters to show emphasis is a no-no. Use italics instead...but not too often.
LunaDoggy4 months agoAuthorDear Ladies and Gentlemen. This is a 'stand alone' story and not part of any series at all. Therefore the part 'Ch 01' should not form part of the title of the story at all, not sure just how this part became included. If any moderator here could help me to correct this, i'd be very grateful.
