Loved, loved, loved it. The hottest illustrated story out there.
More pictures which were hot and loved the pussy eating. Wished it was longer, though.
Smoking blowjob!! Love where this is going.
Loved the handjob. Looking for them to move it up a notch in the next chapter.
Love the story and the pictures!!
of an espresso/latte coffee shoppe. TK U MLJ LV NV
Good, real good, story. If you want to call it illustrated you are missing the mark. Two photos and only one of which has anything to do with the story. The one of her in the tub is relevant. The one of her from the back getting into bed is not part of telling the story. Illustrations and pictures only serve a story insofar as they help move the story along or to make an impact upon the reader with an image of a scene from the text. Random photographs do not do that. Illustrate your stories, yes, but give your reader more than two black and white images and make them relevant. Make them 'speak' to your readers.
I can understand people's anticipation, and I AM planning on at least getting Chapters 3 and 4 out (with illustrations). One of my hesitations is I have not played Skyrim in a while and not sure if I'll be able to continue beyond the next two chapters. The goal was to write and play the game, but with my game crashing and all my addons getting borked, I am discouraged on how far it will get beyond that...but we'll see.
Lately I've been playing the TESO betas, and although not as immersive as Skyrim, debating on a storyline from that as well, but right now, have way too many "unfinished" stories I need to complete, so working on getting everything caught up (which is a huge undertaking considering this is merely a hobby...).
This series is wonderful, if you have it done but without pics that's alright just do it without pics, the story is what's important.
There is one chapter left. This one ended with a victory fuck as the antagonists celebrated getting rid of the protagonist. Is that crazy? I don't know. If you really hate someone, perhaps you might want to do something wild once they're gone.
Chapter 4 will be a little different. More crappy drawings, obviously, unless the Anonymous from Chapter 2's comments can come through with grandma art.... It's all plotted out. I should have some free time soon to wrap this series up.
I like the way you describe the buildup. It draws the reader into the mind of a woman well.
Thank you for giving us your story. Enough actual story that disapointed that will have to wait for the rest of it.
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