You might actually read what wrote before submitting it. It's called proofreading. As for the story itself, 1 star is too many.
When...I...went...to..school...I...wasn't...taught. .. to...put...dots...everywhere...instead...of...the. .. correct...punctuation!
I got a hard on reading it,Now my girl friend is jacking it off.c
More! Now with Nancy's first anal.
Yes! More, please. eg, he has his cheerleader harem, Samantha apologizes toJanice abjectly, he installs a hidden camera in Samantha's room with her knowledge, she puts on more hot shows w the others, he orders them to get a bigger dildoe and they do each other's asses w it, he makes them beg him to give them the real thing, they organize cheerleader/nerds w big dicks party/orgies, whatever!
Please FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS MOTHER AND SON LOVE MAKE A CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!!! PLEASE I BEG U . thank u for yr time
I wish i could have sex with the brother i dont have!😂👌👍.didnt really like the dirty talk but sill....damn...i neeeddd to have sex soo fucking badly right now....uuunnggghh
But then you probably already thought of that! Great story, as always, good pacing, and great use of tension. It's always a pleasure to read something new from Chunks. 5 stars.
you deliver an amazing story at a pace that builds, builds, then smooths out......ah. Enjoy the development and tempo, but wish they were a little longer and delivered quicker. But because they are so good will stand the current flow. Thanks for sharing with us, and your kinky mind. Wish I was "closer" with my cousins, two blondes, a brunette, and a redhead. GP
Great story and story lines... Needs a follow up.
Wow, can't wait for the next installment of the cuck sucking cock. The writing and descriptions are awesome, I get hard as Robin gets hard as the story of degradation unfolds. The lesbian action frames the sadistic very well.
Thank you everyone for your comments and feedback.
I'm glad that a lot of you love my first story!!!
It is not based on a true story, just fantasy, but thanks to all for your kind comments and feedback on my first submission.
Great job! I hope he didn't keep that promise to never touch you again! And I would love to hear the story of you and your brother too, Julie!
She title line. Oops
So nice to see a F/D submission. As you can see by my UserName - they are my favorites! Made me come twice! Can't wait to read the next installment!
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