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Click hereI pulled her into me to hold her. 'I don't think that. But if you really want to get married I'll propose right now. I don't have a ring, and it's not the setting I would choose, but I'm ready."
She leaned back. "No, not yet - please. I'm a mess; I have a bunch of issues to work through. Let's give ourselves a year; if you're not tired of me by then we can talk about it again."
"OK, a year it is," I agreed, stroking her hair. "I'll set an alarm on my phone today."
I got a smile from her on that. We kissed and I held her close to me, never wanting to let go. But I finally let her lean back and her beauty, in all its naked glory, washed over me.
She took a deep breath - god those breasts were spectacular! - and looked at me.
"As I started to say, you need to spend the weekend making love to me."
So I did.
- COMMENTS
Dreamer9715 months agoAuthorThanks for your patience Wasagadave. I've learned to shorten my chapters as I've progressed, so if you continue to read it will require less patience. I'm enjoying how you are getting involved in the story and characters! I have written these stories without a long-term plan, going where the stories take me. Looking back, this series got very dark with a few light moments. For shorter, less dark stories you may enjoy my latest series - The Bet.
wasagadave5 months agoThere are many moments of great writing here. Although I have to admit to skimming through a few of the gangbang scenes; As stand alone stories, they'd hold their own. But, the gangbangs seem repetitive, despite adding new locations and participants.
The end of this chapter has finally shown the deeper emotions of Diane; Actually admitting, with tears in her eyes, she wants something permanent with Dave.
I've noticed that I seem to be the only one posting comments. Am I the only one willing to endure the endless sexual extortion of the beautiful Diane? This series has been a long read. If it weren't for your skill as a writer, I'd have given up long ago.
Your writing deserves 5 Stars, but repetition lowers my rating to a 4.
