There does need to be a second part...
...not so much for what happens between Jen and Jeff, but what happens/happened to Ann, and why she sabotaged the marriage.
Four stars.

Sorry Stang,

I know you've more or less retired from writing, hell you could be dead for all I know (hope not). This one is one of your older ones as well if memory serves. The old stories tend to be not that great IMO. The story kinda sucks, she's a serial cheater two of the kids aren't even his biological children. To rob a man of his only son from a biological standpoint is pretty fucking bad. I know guys raise foster, step and adopted children every day. They're hereos in my mind. However, they go into the situation with their eyes open. They know what they are getting into. Greg raises those children as his own unknowingly for 20 years. That has got to hurt, but you just hand wave that away.

Donna doesn't get punished, is the other sad fact. She looses a marriage that she didn't give two fucks for and still ends up in bed with him in the end. Having him marry Tara - the pretty but sexless woman- was just another kick in the nuts.

TBH I'd love to see this one get the SaddleTramp treatment. Get Dr A in here to right some wrongs, and send Donna to the Gallery.

Absolutely loved this story! Well done, thanks. More please.

As they say, "Keep on truckin" !

Jesus Christ it just kept getting better and better. The sunscreen. The shower. A fucking mini orgasm from swallowing. Mutual masturbation. Twins! It's like a greatest hits tour of my kinks!