Romance Story Comments

Utterly amazing story. Well told and laid out. 5 stars aren't enough. Thank you for all of the hard work and dedication that had to have gone into a story like this.

On the whole, I like it, but we'll have to see how the whole story unrolls.

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One problem, to my mind, is the somewhat overpowering love-at-first-sight (mutual, at that!) plot device. That really does happen--but honestly, not all that often. It feels like, "I can't think of a GOOD...

You left the story unfinished. Its very frustrating to start and become invested in a yarn to have it half finished.

Well told! 5!

Another excellent story. Thank you.

Noel’s birth mother is a despicable person, to go off and leave a minor girl with the psycho father and sons, then having the means didn’t come back to rescue her is beyond reprihensible, it shows a totally self-absorbed person with no shred of humanity. Jonah is almost as bad by...

Doing great - 5.0*!

Brilliant and still more to come, we want it and you're spoiling us. Thanks for an incredible story, insightful writing and some exceptional moments, eg. Andi's Dream about Melony and Paul's seeing her at the cemetery. Look forward to your next contribution.

I think that maybe, Margaret is your sister-in-law; you inadvertantly lost control of your true desire. Better luck next time, hiding her identity.

Great story!

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A really fun read!! Characters with spines and hearts, great sparks, but not interminable enmity, thank you very much. A real treat. More please!!

Really enjoyable. I laughed a lot!

touching and inspiring,

This is the kind of story I’ve come to expect from you. 5 stars.

I get the bittersweet exposure to love by the female poet, and because you put this in romance, I will forgive the limited sex and give 5 stars. Romance itself is not about sex. However, your concept would have worked well in other categories where maybe two Lit authors get together,...

Enjoyed the story and the characters, but have to say your description of the actual work on the farm wasn’t very convincing, based on my experiences helping with chores and field work with/for relatives. The nature of the work was legit, but the timing, maybe not so much.

All the usual buzz words for props! Hooked me from the beginning, friends doing shooters have been my downfall once or twice... I second all the comments about the dialog. I've known women who were so superlative in their vocabulary that I'd simply stop saying anything for hours to...

bout time you put you posted something !!! what's been your major malfunction ???

Damage control from the illicit lovers. Jack is back from the attack. At least the kids Don't blame themselves for their parents separation. (Consequences, Remorse vs justification)

Okay, this installment brought tears to my eyes and bittersweet memories to my heart along with a smile. Thank you Sir.

Katzkin

Excellent! A 5 for Four!

Superb! Congratulations! I hope to see further collaborations.

I only do 5 * and I always comment. Thank you for bringing romance into what can be a terribly difficult subject. I’m originally a Brit that immigrated to NZ in my 50s, but I’m now enough of a kiwi to get the ANZAC strength in our society. I loved the whole Commonwealth aspect, having...

"cantbuymy" says-"And dead mom seems to have a lot of very fine clothes? Well duh, cheatin hoes have to be looking good for they stud muffin lovers, no? No so much for boring taken for granted hubby, eh? idjit. rk

I have read all 25 parts and I absolutely love the stories. I hope you continue the story and that they break in the new house. And she uses the bathroom with him present too

This wasn't a simple mistake, this was a long stand affair, months of it, reconciliation was not deserved as she was lying to both sides of her husband and daughter.

the explanation of why the mom/wife cheated is empty. She chose to cheat, got one of several just rewards, as did the male predator. The explanation explains nothing and certainly doesnt justify anything either. rot in hell both. rk

Great sense of humor and look forward to some more "chain yanking".

Thanks

Oops. Make that Bay2sound.

Terrific. Looking forward to reading the rest of your oeuvre. Easy 5 stars. Also looking forward to your collaboration sound2bay.

First time reading on this app that I got lost in the story. So well written. Such consistent, down-to-earth characters. Believable plot. So sweet. Excellent job well done. I’d shake your hand if i could. Thank you for allowing us experience this story.

Like how you are playing/developing this not uncommon storyline — simmering with anticipation. Nice character development though Emma fainting a bit over the top/melodramatic. Curious: How does dark fantasy romance differ from fun erotic writing? This “Professor” piece could easily...

Very good story! Well written and I loved the ending. 5 stars,

Cool story. Thanks. I thought towards the end she would get pregnant. Loved the dialogue between the two.

5 stars for a pleasant story! I will say the conversation between the two main characters immediately after the fight in the alley struck me as not being at all realistic. If a woman had been essentially violently stripped naked and then on the precipice of being sexually molested...